It envies the good relations of the Masong and Confused friends. When they were young they were always together. They are always concerned and concerned about each other. They are always together in every walk.
The two remained in good standing until their adolescence. Helping one another has been a part of their lives. From farm work to forestry they are always together.
One day it was unexpected that there was a serious illness Masong. That led to the death of the teenager, and Lito was devastated. He couldn't accept that his only friend was gone. He visits her tomb every day and cleanses it. He would often talk to her as if he were just around and listening to her.
Sometimes Lito felt bad. Just a few steps away he was already dizzy. Her mother stopped her from visiting Masong's grave. Lito also felt dizzy for a few days.
Throughout the course of the illness a small animal came home to Lito. Again
you push away from the mother but return to the opposite side of the teenager's room as if watching over her.
When the force was restored, it was Masito's tomb that Lito first went to. There he saw the animal daily driven by the mother. It was located opposite the tomb.
The animal did not leave until he returned. It was asleep at his feet and when he woke up in the morning he would meet her with a bark and wiggle in his tail. Because of the animal, Lito forgets the sadness of Masong's death.
She named the animal Masong but later called it a dog.
You start the story with "It envies the good relations of the Masong and Confused friends." and I have no idea what "Masong" stands for.
Next you write "The two two remained in good standing.." I wonder which two?
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