Failure but a Treasure

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Hello friends, today I'm going to share my failed novels or story. The other books also experienced failures but this time around, I failed for three consecutive times. Well, let's see in the fourth time lol.

The platform that causes me to cry haha. Is Tappy app. It's a new reading app with chat story style. You will read by tapping and the avatars and dialogues will pop out one by one. All you need to do is tap and tap while reading.

Here's my failed story that I let it sleep for awhile as I have lots of on-going novels. I will continue to write with this one after I finish the rest.

It's entitled: Love between Dragon and Vampire

Well, the title is very obvious. It's a love between a dragon and vampire. And let me share with you all the Plot of this story.

Plot Summary:

Alana Eleanor Dragonara was born into a rich family. A spoiled stubborn brat that always does what she wants.

A leader of Fatal Gang and a Notorious Badass Campus Queen. Her life changed when she met the Hot Billionaire Vampire Steven Fletcher.

The King of the Royal Vampire Clan!

Who didn't expect that his Vampire Destiny would turn upside down when he met his human mate?

Of all the people in the whole world, why is it a human mate and not a vampire? A human mate is strictly prohibited by the Vampire Clan and it already has a written decree.

What can he do? He can't resist the smell and taste of his mate's blood.

The biggest surprise of all is that his mate can compel him! And his body will willingly submit to her!

Steven is finding the cause of submission and compelling while his little wicked fake sister is planning something evil with her devil mother, the former Vampire Queen!

Steven put her in prison for attacking Alana but her wicked Mother helped her get out and conquer the whole Royal Vampire Palace.

Sylvia pretends to be Steven with the help of a witch Vampire to cover her true identity while Steven is on a journey looking for the oldest Vampire in town.

Sylvia killed Alana without mercy! She throws away her body into the dark alley where rogue vampires are waiting for their prey.

On the brink of her death, Alana won't forget the face of the man who killed her and make her suffer!

Rogue Vampires are feasting on her body and she's losing lots of blood.

She closed her eyes and succumbed to the darkness that welcomed her.

A few moments later, her blood turns green and all the vampire rogues die! A roar from up above can be heard.

It's a large golden Dragon!

The Dragon carries Alana's lifeless body into its back. And in just a blink of an eye, they vanished into darkness without any trace.

Steven found the oldest Vampire but failed to get the answer that he wanted. He came back and went to Alana's house but there was nothing in there but an empty lot!

He went back to the Royal Vampire Palace just to be captured by Sylvia's men and imprisoned in the underground dungeon. His friend Clinton loves Sylvia and betrays him.

Five years later, the world has been ruled by Vampires! Humans became prisoners and slaves of them. The worst scenario is they become the food of different dishes that vampires freely choose.

The beautiful and lively human world became dark and lifeless! There's no way out. Except for death!

Alana's Father and brother have been fighting secretly ever since. They are the Vampire hunters but choose to lie low and hide for a while when half of their members have been killed.

Alana woke up after five long years of sleeping and hibernating. She's reborn with the help of her mother whom she thought is already dead.

Her mother is the Queen of The Dragon Empire. Alana is a half-human-dragon hybrid. She's been sleeping for five years but she didn't forget what happened to her! She's up for Revenge and Steven Fletcher will pay for what he did!

Sylvia is still pretending as Steven and was surprised when the Dragon Clan declares an all-out war to end the cruel Vampire supremacy!

The big Battle happened between Vampire hunters, Vampires, and Dragons! There are many casualties and dead bodies are scattered all over the street. Sylvia and her wicked Mother escaped cowardly, sacrificing their Vampire Clan!

Alana found Steven and wanted to kill him. They fight but Steven is still under the vampire witch's power and is too weak. Alana can't resist the attraction of the mate pull that will make her weak when Steven touches her! She didn't kill him and bring him to their Dragon Empire as a prisoner.

The world is at peace again. No more cruel Vampires. Alana sets Steven free and he begs her to listen to him heartily. She agreed to listen for the last time as she plans to go back to her normal life.

He explained everything from the beginning that they parted, up until the last details. Alana couldn't believe what she heard and still couldn't trust Steven. He did everything to make her fall in love with him. He cannot afford to lose her again.

He's willing to be compelled and submit his whole life to the one he loves! He's wondering why he's in love when his heart is dead. He didn't know that his heart was not dead! It was only frozen and cursed!

His Love for Alana breaks the curse and his human heart functions again. The curse of Fletcher's blood has been lifted! And the only key is TRUE GENUINE LOVE.

Alana was touched and couldn't control her feelings anymore. She loves Steven and that's all that matters now. Steven became human and lost his power.

They got married and he's ready to become one of the Dragons through a Dragon Ceremony from the book of Dragon chronicles.

The Ceremony started and Sylvia surprisingly showed up and was willing to fight for Steven. She will not allow him to become a Dragon! He's a vampire and she will turn him again. But Alana won't let her ruin their life once more! She killed Sylvia and his wicked Mother was also killed by the Dragon Queen.

Alana chooses to spend a quiet and peaceful life with Steven and their triplets. The Dragon babies of the Dragonara and Fletcher Families are cute and irresistible!

-End-

HEA-Happily Ever After.

leejhen 🤍

So, how was it? Are you bored reading? Lol. But yeah, that's my Plot.

And the feedback that I received, why this story failed is that they didn't know who is the villain of the story.

What about you? Do you know who? Haha. Well, Thank you all for reading...

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Writing a novel is not that easy, I appreciate you for doing that.

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Thank you. It's not easy and can make you crazy lol.

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