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Title: memories in polaroid 

summer-college students- 

night time 

friends of girl, hang out with other squad 

While laughing, the girl checked her phone delivered tanan msgs , tapos wala na nag reply ang guy,  

Nag check sya s ig, naay ig story ang friend na naa sla sa decent club and naay mga girls 

-nag excuse ang girl, ni adto ug balcony, 

in an overview, ddto nag unwind ang girl,(wiped tears) (sad expression)(tulala) 

 tpos ang guy, kay naabot nag picture2 lang gud, nya natunong na naa pd ang girl ddto na angle, tpos ni tan aw dayon ang girl na fierce , 'stalker ka ba?'(while wiping tears) 

tpos ang guy kay serious type,nitutok ra s girl, iya rang g snob ang girl,(another angle pic) 

tapos ang girl, 'aba ibang level na pala mga stalker ngayon, sila na snob' 

tpos ang guy kay nag phone lang tapos nag glance kadali s iyaha 

tapos ang girl kay n duol na g labay ang can, akin na s phone, patingin 

ang guy kay 'di ako stalker' 

girl: alam mo ikaw creepy ka, pati mukha mo 

guy: sayo din (letting her see the photo na naka simangot' 

girl: crush mo ba ako? san ka na school? follower kita sa Ig ko no, kaka update ko lng naman kahapon ng bikini pic, baka ikaw yung si @sealover_34. 

guy: di kita kilala , wla akong kilala na ikahihiya ko 

girl: ah talaga ikaw kilala kita, ikaw yung palaging nag la-like ng mga photo ko s ig pero di ka lang nag follow para hindi ka masyado halata , dba @sealover_34? HAHAHHAHAHA 

guy: ewan ko sayo, bakit ba ko napadpad dito, nasira yung ambiance ng city lights ah, badtrip 

girl: ay sorry naman sayo, spell nga ng ambiance? 

guy: ano course mo? 

girl: wow smooth mo kuya, bakit mag shi-shift ka? 

guy: anyway, stop with your nonsense di ko na alam kung tao pa ba kausap ko ngayon.(turns away) 

girl: ay joke lang, ikaw naman kasi , summer na summer course agad topic, dba pwedeng tanungin mo muna saan gala ko bukas? 

guy: so saan? 

girl: (caught off guard) grabe naman, best in obeying ka ba? 

guy: smirk 

girl: check mo lang Ig ko stalker naman kita eh 

guy: di ko alam Ig mo 

girl: (username) may bagong post ako hahhahhh 

guy: stare 

girl: joke lang parang badtrip kana talaga hahahah (pogi mopa naman) 

guy: bakit may itim2 sa gilid ng mukha mo 

girl: ah nalimutan ko kasing naglagay ako ng mascara, anyway, balik na ko doon, baka hinahanap na ako 

Guy: nag stare sa papalakad palayo na girl 

Guy: im back, im back for good 

Friend-pat sa back 

 

 

 

 

-pauwi na ang girl tapos sad ghpon sya, pagdating sa apartment na drtso dayon syag ka hapla sa bed- 

morning- coffee, check sa phone, naay new follower, open account, yung guy kagabi, pic sa nightview na edited like polaroid tapos naay girl na blurry caption: had a liitle laugh. 

-girl's reaction, stalk s profile, mutual friend niya ang kauban s pic, e message unta niya pero nag hesitate ang girl, so wala. 

 

 

prepare to hang out with friends sa resort, taking picture, tapos while nag eat,  

friend1; nag invite friend ko mamayang gabi may laro daw sila, need ng taga cheer mga bes 

friend2: di ako sure kasi baka pupunta sa apartment mama ko eh kasi mmay pinabili ako kanina. 

friend3: curfew bes 

friend4: wait lang, text ko s fred baka sasama sya edi go na din ako nyan 

friend1: ikaw? (girl) , 

-girl- checks her phone 

Friend1: hoy ano na earth to (girl) hindi pa rin ba nag reply? 

girl: hindi eh , kagabi pa, tapos nakita ko s ig story ni (friend) may mga babae 

friend2:talaga? Nako ito talgang si (guy), ilang araw na yan ah, ano ghost lang? 

friend3: pero seryoso (girl), you can open up to us anytime,sabihin mo lang anong gagawin namin, basta wag lang past 9 ha, nasa bahay na ako nyan HAHHAHAH 

friend 4: basta if boys yan, dont worry, may bagong single friend s fred, wait chat ko sya ano ulit name non. 

girl: thanks guys, maybe ill talk to him in person, anyway, sabay ako sayo later 

(friend2: ano ka ba naman, ikaw talaga pag yan nagka sakit o hindi na pwede ma donate kidney nyan lagot ka talaga 

friend 3: yeah we know (girl) bakit kasi iniiyakan mo pa yun hanggang ngayon, marami na nga nag hahabol sayo ikaw pa yung hindi 

friend4: let her take her time, palibhasa kayong dalawa ni (f2) walang masyadong alam jan kaya umuwi na kayo hahahah joke lang (hugs them) 

friend1: okkkeyyy yan, yan yung gusto ko (affirming face expresson) 

(may tumawag) wait sagot ko lang to 

Basketball court 

-tig cheer natong girls, tapos naa sad tung guy gbie , nya nakita sa guy ang girl 

Tapos nag laro na, sgeg ka score ang guy, tapos one time naa sa front ang guy sa girl tapos , g wink’an sa guy ang girl, tpos nag tulala lang ang girl pero g siungog na sya sa iyang friends tpos nag cheer tapos ang team sa guy nadaog then congrats, tapos pic 

Tapos after ato nag sabay silag walk s street 

Guy: so, I guess hindi na ako ang stalker this time? 

Girl: hindi ko alam na kasali ka sa team no, di ka nga magaling eh 

Guy: sa wink ako magaling (winks) 

Girl: sira ba yang isang mata mo? Pikitin mo na lang kaya yan , parang nasisira na eh 

Guy: gutom ka ba? Tara libre ko 

Girl: hindi, pero sige haahahhha 

(alternative plot, gsto s guy ang girl pero never nagka chnace kay naay bf tapos this time nagbulag na sla, so sinle ang grl for  5mnths, g kalit ra shag byaan s guy, wla na syay feelings pero naa lang jd syay questions, gsto niya ma fix kay basin naa s iya ang mali , dra pa sya mahimutang kung mkabalo sya or magka tarong slag talk s guy, dli sya gusto mag in a rel habang naa pa syay whys or what ifs kay dili niya gusto takasan, ang guy bago rpd sya naka balik s pinas) 

---------ilang talk kay after s basketball(another polaroid)(1st polaroid frst meet, pero naa puy polaroid pic before) 

Nakagusto njd ang guy s girl before, so after the basketball talk, nag start nag ligaw ang guy, by making the girl feel better) 

Things to feel better 

-exercise(pics again) 

Lunch(pics again) 

-g ubanan mag shopping, mag hair color, mag nail churva, matching tattoo, roadtrip, foodtrip 

Then lastly gpa talk sya s guy 

After ato kay naay surprise, slideshow sa pics nila and tung na meet na diay sya s guy before wala lang napansin s girl kay lahi iyang gusto.  

-flashback na ga tan aw ang guy s girl, ngka meet sla s girl, tapos ang girl kay sge rag ka problema s iyang uyab. 

Tappos ana dayon ang guy, im back, im back for good, kato na time kay problemado pa ang guy tungod s fam, muna dli pa sad sya ready mag love s ubankay dli pa pd niya love iyang self. Dghan pa syag e fix, iyang self, iyang fam, pero krn kay ready na sya, kay kato na time nag divorce iyang parents nya sya ug iyang mama nag adtog states nya broken kayo sya, pero krn healed na sya, 

Na meet s girl iyang mama , and ang mama s girl kay na meet s guy sd with papa, and ang last pic kay naa slay pic sa polaro 

(continues eating then laughs) 

 

 

at 6pm 

(friend 1 message the loc) 

nag prepare 

 

 

loc- 

pagsulod ni girl, nag greet sya s ubang friends, tapos ang host kay g greet sla, naa s friend 1 and 4 with fred, and pag lingi ni girl kay naka tan aw na daan s guy s iyaha. na shock sya.  

(niduol ang girl) 

girl: u saw my ig story thats u ure here dba? ikaw techy ka na stalker, modernize 

guy: im friends with coby(host) 

girl: oh really? bakit ngayon lang kita nakita, baga bagong follower ka ni coby hahahahaa 

guy: coby! waves hand , tell her since when tayo magkakilala 

coby: oh, were friends since freshmen, sya team captain namin tapos he moved to the states after that and niw he's back for good, kahapon, sorry i wasnt able to introduce him to you properly, sorry bro (facing to guy) hirap kasi nito kausap 

guy: okay lang, di ko naman yan kakausapin , sumakit ulo ko eh 

girl: hala talaga lang ha, akala ko talaga stalker to kahapon eh 

coby: so nagkita kayo kahapon? paano? saan? 

guy: coincidentally, dun sa fave ko 

girl: (na curious) 

coby: oh doon pa talaga hahahaha anyway dumating na yung ibang tropa ko dyan muna kayo. 

 

 

guy: bakit ka tahimik? nagka sakit ka bigla? 

girl: sumakit tyan ko nakita kita ngayon di ko alam parang nagka diarrhea ako bigla 

--------------((((((guy: (sips drink) ano hilig mo? 

girl: ano category para hindi confusing teh 

guy: hobbies, past time or parang gusto mo lang gawin 

girl: matulog  

guy: (smirk, shakes head) 

girl: joke lang, i love taking pictures, finollow mo naman na ako so it makes sense, pictures ko,a ko rin dapat model HAHAHHHA 

guy: ako din hilig ako sa photography pero di ko gusto na ako yung nasa pic 

girl: ako gusto ko, try nga, pa show off naman sa skills jan, e ju-judge ko, dyan naman ako magaling mang judge AAHHAHAH 

guy: (takes phone, tapos ang girl nag pose na nice) 

girl: patinginn, ay ito bet ko to, tsaka to, ito din, ay ito delete mo ito, ay wag ako nlang, ikaw na delete s recently baka may makita pa ako eh 

guy: ano? 

girl: selfie mo na mga pangit angle, ihh nakakasuka 

guy: smirk, shakes head 

girl: oh ito send mo t sa ig ko ha, post ko yan mamaya 

 

 

_shots and fun na scenes dayon- 

 

 

tpos arrrive at apartment, checks phone, (username) send a photo , tapos open message, tapos save, tapos sabi, thank you, post ko to, like mo ha support mo self mo hahahha 

 

 

edited it a litlle, post, caption, ganda ko dito 

guy commented: absolutely 

dm: ikaw napaka plastic mo, absolutely pa sinabi eh 

guy commented: ang ganda mo, makasama 

 

 

dm: oa naman neto , wala ka lang talagang ibang friends, tapos ako lang gusto kuma usap sayo ahhahhaha 

guy: kaya nga  

girl: oa, sasabihin ko kay coby to. 

guy: matulog ka na, good night 

girl: okay, para namang mama 'to 

guy; seen 

 

 

next morning:  

guy: we have photography workshop today, sama ka? 

girl: pwede din, saan ba yan? 

guy: (send location) 

 

 

location:  

leader ng seminar: today, our workshop has an activity by pair, so choose your pair, the other one is the model, then the other one is ang photgraphy, you can use your locations, then send me your top 5, yung mapili, will have a prize your output will be sent on gmail. 

(so naging partner sila) all the pictures, poses, locations, tapos sila din edit ang guy kay lahi nag tan aw s girl) 

at the end of the day, hinatid sya sa apartment tapos natulog 

 

 

friends get together with girl and naa s coby 

Girl: so tell me about (guy) 

Coby: he’s a good friend, and fun to be with 

Girl: fun? Fun pa talaga description mo 

Coby: oh bakit? Masaya ka na man diba pag nakasama mo sya 

Girl: grabe naman to, pero ano, yung girlfriend nya or ex or ano ba , baka nasa states hahahhaha 

Coby: he just broke up with her ex girlfriend maybe a month or two 

Girl: oh really? Wow ang fresh pa ah 

Coby: pero its because of their parents na naging sila, mostly because of business partnership, tpos yung girl ayaw talaga  

Girl: so baka may gusto si (guy)? 

Coby: di ko alam, he never mentioned 

Girl: okay anyway, gonna go outside lang 

 

-nag tan aw stare blankly ang girl- 

Minutes later, naabot si guy 

Guy: they told me you’re here 

Girl: yeah, nagpa hangin lang 

Guy: tahimik mo ngayon 

Girl: tahimik naman talaga ako, palagi(look at him) 

Guy: oh okay, you’re scary 

Girl: mas nakakatakot ma attach 

Guy: stared at her intently 

Girl: so bakit nga ba dumating ka 

Guy: because you’re here 

Girl: raise her eyebrows 

Guy: sabi n coby baka daw kasi may nasabi sya 

Girl: si coby talaga, ginamit pa ko para mamblo, gsto lang nun nandito ka, pag sabihan ko nga (turns around) 

Guy: (held her wrist) I like u 

Girl: wow so likezone ako? 

Guy: stared at her 

Girl: confused ka lang kasi kaka break mo lang 

Guy: we were never on a romantic level, its arranged 

Girl: wow lakas mka movie, ano genre nyo? 

Guy: seryoso 

Girl: di bagay sayo 

Guy: I want you...to be mine 

Girl: u want me, u don’t need me, gsto mo lang ako dahil nagiging masaya ka, pano ko malungkot ka na? 

Guy: Iill get to know u 

Girl: wag, baka pag nalaman mo kung ano talaga ako, hindi mo ako magugustuhan 

Guy: gusto morin ba ako? 

Girl: gusto kita, sa commitment, hindi  

Guy: bakit? 

Girl: kasi nakakatakot, ma attach, mag invest ng emosyon, tapos di mo alam kung ano mangyayari at sa kung anong paraan kayo maghiwalay 

Guy: bakit ka ba takot? 

Girl: di ko alam, its been 2 years since we broke up, I still have things to clarify, I want to apologize, but I wasn’t able to, ayaw kong maging tayo, dahil para makalimot, ayaw kong mag mahal habang di ko pa mahal sarili ko 

Guy: ano bang meron sayo, ang alam ko lang mahal na kita 

Girl: mahal mo ba talaga o attracted ka lang  

Guy: I guess you’re not okay with your past, can I get involve? I know you want to be fine with yourself and your past, and I want to help you, and be with you along the way, gusto kong magpa alam na pwede ba meron akong gawin para maging okay ka? 

Girl: just don’t make any promises, or words just to comfort me, I'll give you permission but ayaw kong mag hope na magagawa mo talaga, nasa sayo na kung anong gawin mo 

Guy: if this is the only way for you to accept me and  make you feel better 

Girl: thank you, for making me feel better, even just for awhile 

 

The next day: 

Nag ring ang phone 

Guy: time to get up, lets go for a morning exercise, it helps your mental and emotional state, oh sinearch ko pa yan s google ha, tara 

Girl: what? Okay wait 

-jogging, laughing, but water 

Tapos hinatid sa apartment, 

Guy: okay lets have lunch later , ano gusto mo 

Girl: ikaw 

Guy: food, (girl)please 

Girl: okay, anything, basta hindi exotic hahahaaha 

Guy: okay gonna pick you up later 

 

Lunch- 

Guy: im outside 

Girl: sandali lang wala pa kong lipstick 

Guy: its okay u’re beautiful without it 

Girl: hala sge ka gusto ka may kasamang zombie? 

Guy: chuckle 

 

Dinner: 

Guy:May pupunta jan sayo 

Girl: ano? 

Guy: basta tanggapin mo lang 

 

-delivery guy- 

-opens package 

-handwritten note about how beautiful she is and kung ano kaganda kalooban nya 

-ig message- 

Guy: buti na lang di na aabot ng months padala ng letter ngayon, good night (name) 

 

The next day 

Guy: can you get extra beautiful today? Wear clothes you are comfortable and feel beautiful with,like next level kind of beauty. 

Girl: ha? Bakit? Meet the parents na agad? 

Guy: basta, ill pick you up at  5pm 

 

-nag prep ang girl 

-at the restaurant 

Girl saw her ex, she held his hand, what are you doing? 

Guy: don’t worry im here, I talked to him, and he’s fine with it, he’s single just a month ago, so theres no problem with you talking to him 

Girl: I don’t know 

Guy: I reserved you a place, away from lots of people, ill be nearby 

 

With ex 

Girl: hi, how are you 

Guy: im good, im sorry I let you go like that 

Girl: its fine, I just want to tell you that im sorry, ive been so immature 2 years ago, I hurt you emotionally then connfused you with everything , but didn’t say a thing. I was always the one who end things 

Guy: its fine, you don’t have to be sorry, im sorry it took you years to be fine 

Girl: I know, but I did it because I need to get myself back, I lost myself, when were together, when we broke up, I found myself again, the better version of myself, so thank you. 

Guy: im sorry we don’t have a proper closure 

Girl: yeah, that’s the hard part 

Guy: just free yourself now, be happy with someone again, someone that will bring out the best version of yourself 

Girl: I just found him. (smile) thank you, and I hope you would be happy too. 

Girl and guy: hug and the guy walked away 

 

Guy:  

 ill show you something 

 

Slideshow na pics sa freshman year , naay get together ddto s night light view, naay pic na naay mga friends tapos naa sla both ends, naa ang uyab tapos sa pikas side kay naa s guy.  

Guy: do you remember the guy, na nalungkot dahil mag transfer sya ng school sa time na magiging part sya sa basketball varsity team? 

Girl: yeah? 

Guy: that was me, I was really sad that time because it’s the last time na ill be with my friends tapos nandun ka, u gave me that canned drink and said na I can let it out pag isigaw ko,I shout and let my bad feelings go away, that was the time na I was attracted to you, then have that username, liking all your post kahit hindi naka follow 

Girl: I was just kidding the whole time, kahit sino-sino pinagbibintangan ko nang acc na yun hahahhhaa 

Guy: u got one right, and u got me 

Girl: I never thought I met you before, but im glad I met you now 

Guy: I love you (name) 

Hug and kiss sa forehead) 

Drone view 

Girl: I love u too. 

 

 

 

 

 

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