@Xzeon
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I wonder how it feels to be one... *I wonder how It feels to be a raindrop* *Dropping from the mother clouds with the thunderclaps* *Shooting in unison with your fellow droplets* *and plunge to the roofs of establishments and houses.*
*I wonder how to it feels to be one of those wild flowers* *No one sowed and seeded but still it grows.* *Watered and cared by* *no one's hands* *Yet it exists and even blooms with arrogance.*
*I wondered how it would be like to be a stream,* *that flows and leave it's home with a new dream* *to reach a different goal and destination* *from calm waters, running rivers to the waves of the ocean.*
**~~>XZEON<~~**
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I wonder how it's like to become the meiosis cell division. Breaking those couple of alleles apart😅😅😅
interesting🤣🤔 you keep me wondering about it also.though I'm no longer familiar with science😭
😓😓😓😓just enjoy the vibe then😓😓😓
I'm enjoying 😅. Do you want to spread your genes? 😁
Nahh, want to take care of genes that need care😉😉
Can you take care of my genes then. They are exclusive and with high class😅.
Easy. collect rasin from tree....preserve you hair or nail..or a small part of your body. It will be preserved for thousands of year😉😉
Lol. I would become mummified. 🤣
Yeah...your DNA will be.. Easiest way to preserve DNA with natural substance
But i dont want to see my body full of wrinkles all over my body when i get my second life back.
Nah.. Your whole body can be designed with synthetic Biotechnology. You will be good as new
This is a hard read for me with all the bold and lines underneath. I wonder why, what exactly it adds to the words written. Perhaps @heartbeat1515 can appreciate it.
it lessens the boring font
I can only wonder with you😅
🤣🤣🤣
I can't help but wonder too but I understand how they feel because I'm almost just like them.... it's hard being the only one....too deep a poetry
I'm glad you feel the message. Thanks for stopping by.
I am summoned by @wakeupkitty. The poem is an expression of the poet if he is part of nature. I like the poem but the bold and underline does not make it look like a poem. @charlotte is this a new way of writing a poem? A lot do this. All written in bold letter.
It's a personal style or choice I think, sometime bold words are used when we use prompts in making our poem to give emphasis to the word, but making it bold all throughout the sentences is a personal choice of the poet.
I see. In my opinion, the bold letter is only used for words that we wanted to highlight, as you said prompt, instead of the whole poem. Thank you for stopping by.
Yeah, i agree. Thanks for being here.
You edited. Now it looks nicer for me. Thank you.
Wala yan, trip lang. Thanks anyway. 😉
Sorry i just stopped by.. Such a full day busy with tutorial on kids, i can't grasp time to peek on my phone since the modular studies started. Well, i don't ussually apply the bolds and underlined words, i just tried it for experiment.
No worries. I can understand that. At least your reply. I see. Well, it does not give a nice reading features if it is al in bold. It is like forcing the eyes to look at each word. Usually bold is use for highlighted sentences or words. As charlotte said it could be a new style for writing. I don't think it is comfortable to look at all bold text on a screen. It is just my opinion.
I love how you wonder through the point of view of nature❤ and like the other reader the underlined poem quite bothered us while reading but like I said it's a personal style so i guess it's okay😁 as a whole you wrote a good one❤
Thank you, i decided to edit it, as i look at it the third time, i realize its bothersome😅