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Promises are broken
**Hi everyone I hope you all are doing well and enjoy your day** **💔Promises are broken** We are friends you said that Our friendship changed into love We fall in love♥️ You promised we live together forever then why you Leave me You promised we didn't fight then why you fight with me You promised we enjoy this world then why you hurt me You promised we stay together then why you leave me alone in dark world You promised you live for me then why you die for others You promised you heard only my voice then why you forget my sound You promised we make sweet memories then why you forget these days You promised you ignore others for me then why you ignore me for other's You promised we die together then why you die before then me😢 ****You promised you didn't broke the promises then why you😢**** ****"" broke the promises""**** **its my 1st potery tell me how Is this?your feedback is highly appreciable for me** It's written by me and I already shared it on 👇 https://www.uptrennd.com/post-detail/promises-are-broken~Njk2ODIw#editor
25 comments
its an amazing write up. keep it up
Thanks I will keep it up
It's really amazing and emotional.. Very heart Touching feelings
Thanks for your review
In now a days there proverb thst Promises are for breaking
When we broke our promises they broke everything.
Yeah you are right broke promises will destroy out life
We should fulfill our promises
You did a lovely job in your poetry Some people keep promises without fulfilling them
Yeah people didn't feel the pain of broke promises
Okay brother
Its an amazing write up and that's so true that our frndshp can be changed to love
Yeah thanks for review its appreciatable for me
Love this poem, thanks for sharing this thoughtful poet
You are highly wellcome
Thanks for this amazing poet ate, keep writing 👍
Yeah I will keep to writing it thanks for your appreciations
Such a sad poetry it's well, I hope you have recovered from it heart break
Yeah I try to write it from heart feelings
Beautiful poet, here, promise and always fulfill your promise.
It's very sad when people tends to break their promise....nice piece of poetry buddy.
Thats why i dont love too deeply
This is awesome poetry mahn, your choice and combination of words is really superb
Such a sad poetry it's well, I hope you have recovered from it heart break
You really did well with this poem. And it explains what happens and what goes through those people that are heartbroken's minds. Keep this up and you'll get better over time.