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You can definitely call it love at first sight. I must say that a person with beautiful character is the one who stands by us all the time. And, I must tell you that you should work hard for both of you.
These type of love are indeed an important things to embrace in this unforeseen times.

By the way, I must say about your grammar that you need to shed some ligh t on the tense. You need to check some sentences where you needed to use "were" instead of "was". And also you used "him" at some places when you were addressing your girlfriend you should use "her."

Take notes of small things and you will improve greatly. I once had a shattered English.

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