The Broker

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[WP] Exactly one hour before death, no matter the cause, everybody is visited by a man in a blue tie. Nobody else can see or hear him, but he always offers the same deal to everyone he meets. Whoever refuses the deal dies. Whoever accepts the deal disappears, and is never seen again.

Blue ties were now an item of horror cosplay and fanfiction.

It was when the psychics, mediums, and necromancers started talking about it. About what some dead people stuck in limbo channeled to them. About the man in a blue tie.

At first, it sounded like a bogus story - and even now, it still did to most skeptics, critics, and scientists. But for the normal people, the average people like me who acknowledged that the paranormal existed, we were all afraid of when the man in the blue tie would come and propose that deal.

The deal was like being stuck between a rock and a hard place - it was like choosing between the devil and the deep blue sea. None of the spirits ever revealed what the choice would be, but they made it clear that the terms of the deal were very hard to take, and accepting the deal would mean they would live, but they would vanish into oblivion.

It seemed like a no-brainer since I assumed that people would normally choose to die since disappearing forever just didn't make sense, but later I found out how people... how I myself did not want to die.

While both involve oblivion, the questions surrounding the death were too many. Questions that ate away at my brain, questions that had no answers, since all the spirits that could be channeled had not gone on to the afterlife.

All I could do was hope that I would never get visited, but that was not mean to be.

"Are you ready to hear the terms of the deal?"

The question stunned me. Normally, a lot of pranks had started based on the stories, and the police had to intervene. But this was different. Time stopped. The birds in the sky, the cars, the people, everything froze in place.

And there he was, in a black suit, black shirt and blue tie, carrying a black briefcase. His irises were intensely dark, yet they looked empty and devoid of emotion or life.

"Are you..."

"I am the Broker. I have come to you with the deal. You can either choose to die, which will happen on this very street in one hour, or you can choose to accept the terms of the deal and disappear forever."

"And where do I disappear to? Will I be alive? Will there be others there?"

"All I can say is that you will leave. I can't reveal any other details to you. That, you will have to find out on your own."

I was quiet for a long time. It was so shocking that I kept my mouth shut. All my hopes, dreams, dashed forever. I had been met by that man. I had to make that goddamn choice.

Sh!t.

"Make your choice now."

"What's the deal? What do I have to do?"

"Your job... is to ensure that this engineer does not turn up at his site today. He's supervision the creation of the biggest shopping mall today, and it's his job to make sure that the foundation is good enough to support the building..."

"If he doesn't turn up, that means..."

"Yes, in one year from now, the mall will be open. Thousands will attend the opening. It will collapse during a small earthquake. No survivors."

"What?! That's insane!"

"Overpopulation is what's insane. This is one of the many mechanisms that they have to use to control it. You humans are the ones forcing us to have to intervene in such a crude manner."

"Still it's..."

"...the price you have to pay if there is to be an earth in the next 100 years, and that's that."

He wasn't budging, and now I could see why many didn't take the deal. He just had to tell me what was going to happen if I did, so even if I did take the deal and live, the gravity of what I'd done, the guilt, those things would weigh me down forever.

"I'm not taking it."

"Pfft. You're just a waste. If you think by any chance you just averted a huge crisis, then you're wrong. Someone else will take this deal, but you, you're gone."

With that, he disappeared and time continued.

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It was five minutes to the said time. All I had to do was avoid being on that road - once that was done, I would have proved him wrong and hopefully, I could live.

Hopefully.

My phone buzzed. It was my mom.

"Hello? Mum?"

"This is her neighbor! She's just fallen down outside, and it doesn't... it doesn't look so good! Hurr-"

I ended the call and hailed a taxi immediately. The road to Mom's house was a different route from that street. It was safe... there was no way I was going to be there.

Dialing our family doctor's line time after time without a response, I hit the chair in front of me in exasperation. I dialed again and he answered.

"Hello?"

Then I looked at my watch.

14:0o PM.

The appointed time.

"Yo, driver... where are we?" I asked, scared as I looked around in shock.

"Oh, I cut into 86th street to avoid the traffic..."

"You did wh..."

I never got to finish that sentence because a car smashed into ours from the back and crushed the life out of me instantly.

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🀣🀣 this is really funny

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Lol. Is it weird that I liked the ending πŸ˜‹ πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

I loved the story but I would have taken the ...hmmm .....I wouldn't have taken the deal..... But then you'll be saving the world but cause lots of deaths.....arrrrr

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The deal... me sef I still don't know!

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Haha but you wrote itπŸ˜‚

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Nice

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hey dude πŸ˜†, this was a great one-shot, but really, if it was me, Id've accepted the deal, lol

i think that's the kind of person i am. and i also like reading fantasy and sci-fi hahaπŸ‡πŸš€.

by the way, i went ahead and caught🎣 all the typos for you, it would be best if you edited your story πŸ˜…πŸ‘. check it out below.

Typo Errors or Grammar Improvements:

  1. afraid of when the man in the blue tire > change to blue tie

  2. being in between a rock and a hard place > change to "being stuck between a rock and a hard place"

  3. I would never get the visitation > change to I would never be visited

  4. but that was not mean to be. > mean to mean't

  5. It was shocking that kept my mouth shut. > missing "I"? Kept my mouth shut? or change to: It was [so] shocking, that I kept my mouth shut.

  6. this engineer does not turn up to his site today. > change to "this engineer does not turn up [at] his work site today."

  7. He's supervision the creation > change to He's [supervising] the creation

  8. It will collapse during a land tremor. > maybe change this to [during an earthquake?]

  9. Dialing outr family doctor's > typo [our family]

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4 years ago

Nice

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Thanks! I'm glad you liked the story, and thanks for the corrections! I was a lot busy and I just posted it.

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yeah, i already read the story, so i guess it's better to spot the errors while i'm reading. πŸ˜…,

it's better that way😜.

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4 years ago

Nice article to make

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4 years ago

The ending makes me laugh πŸ˜‚

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πŸ˜‚

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Lmao, when I read it the first time, I had no idea what the story was about. When I read it a second time, it made perfect sense. I suck at reading and comprehension!

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πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I get. Sometimes it happens to me to, I just need a second read to assimilate

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They areee and this ending was a bit off for me. Maybe i would have taken the deal. I just had to drag someone's ass there anyways. It couldn't be that hard, right?

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