Highly Sensitive (Poetry)
Likely a Sponge, I have become They are Vigour sucking They let it out, out on the sponge Ugly moist, it continues to trickle Until it is a spring Until it is an ocean Forever lost into the void Blackness continues to seep It is porous I stretched myself Into emptiness Transforming all of their darkness Letting all go of what I have absorbed If this poem captivated your spirit tip me here or **cointree** https://cointr.ee/monskins Connect via **blog**, **instagram** http://alyinwanderland.com/ http://instagram.com/alyinw4nderland Poetry book available now on kindle https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B088NL3ZLR Photos via unsplash
14 comments
Nice poetry. Second picture is awesome. keep writing. and Thank you for this beautiful poem.
I appreciate your feedback regarding my poem.. @AmitDhar Btw how do I tag another user? I thought I would just put “@“ before your user 🙂
Ha Ha. you already did it. You to put @ before the id name. That's it. you can tag more person in a sentence.
Really 🤔 how come when I click it. It doesn’t go to your profile though
ow.. But i got your notification when you mentioned me. literally you can't go through the profile by clicking the tag.
Oh ok I understand this feature now @amitdhar hahaha thank you 😊
I like your poetry! :0) How the flow is build..
Thank you. In the end what was absorbed was let out. hehehe.
Your article is good. Very nice poetry. I hope you will write more poem and more new informative articles.
You’re welcome Abir. I will write some in a bit..
Dear YOUR poem makes me gloomy and don’t know why i am getting nostalgic. You are a good poem reader, lots of love dear.
Yes this is a gloomy one. Maybe you’re highly sensitive person too that’s why you felt it 🤗
I am sensitive as a person.... While reading YOUR poem i just found similarity... Specially with last 4 lines... Keep it up.
How long have you been writing? Keep writing and keep aiming. I understand your writing as I am just like you. I love poetry too and have been writing since 12 years old.