Castor oil ~Freewrite

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She was about to leave the medical store in no time and old man came with severe pain in her abdomen as he was holding it.

She said are you ok dear  ?  store boy ran towards the man and asked for help he said my tummy is iching do something to make me alive I will die of pain.

Oooo this much pain ? She was harrassed by the situation of man.

Have you tried castor oil before coming here ? 

What ? Castor oil ? Yes castor is good for abdominal pain as it's fighter of constipation and give relieve promptly.

Brought some hurridely.

The store boy ran towards his work 

She starts telling the man the benefits of Castor oil for dailly usage 

she said politely 

Castor oil is  very good laxative and fights temporary constipation.

It hyderates our skin due to its thickness.

It can act as anti inflamatory agent.

also it's used for wound healing 

meanwhile the store boy came with pack of Castor oil in hand.

Oh Thank God you are back 🙏

She snached bottle of Castor oil from store boy's hand and start applying to the belly of the old man.

Also she asked him to have a spoon of it to swallow.

They were doing medication on sitting someone's doorstep.

The owner of the house get out of the home and said what's wrong guys ? She replied hi sir . This old man isn't feeling well we are sorry for trouble.

The owner said oo my dear lady what sort of trouble ? Please come in.

He picked the old man the castor oil and bag in his hand

They all are went in. Store boy went to store to look after for the customers.

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Nice article my dear 🤗

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Thank you dear.

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Great dear nice artical.

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This is good step to Write a Free writing You can improve it very soon And Soon you will also a freewritter

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I like it, its the interesting article 💃💃

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You gave it a good try, freewriting, but your sentences, the whole story are not fluently written (translated?) and the genders (he, she) are mixed up which makes it a hard read.

As a moderator: I will wait for your answer and advice you strongly to use the free app (or site)Grammarly. I hope it can fix these issues for you.

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Oh thank you so much for the suggestion I would love to hear more advices from you. Can you please suggest me some app or site to figure out my mistakes while freewrite I will try to produce better next time Thank you for the deep insight

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I just told you the name of the free tool it's called: Grammarly. You can download the free app in the play store. If you did so you use a different keyboard to type with. It tells you your failures which you can change and some it automatically changes while writing.

You can also use this link https://www.grammarly.com/grammar-check

Write your text and copy-paste it into it and let it check it.

If you use a computer it should be possible too to let it run while you type.

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