Sunset (Free Verse)

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Pay attention to the entire evening,
the entire evening is the coolest down daylight of all.
Early, the exciting, entire evening.
Does the entire evening make you shiver?
does it?

The periodic event that really hopes,
Above all others is the stormy sunrise.
Does the stormy sunrise make you shiver?
does it?

All that is small is not medieval maghrib,
medieval maghrib, by all accounts, is big.
Does the medieval maghrib make you shiver?
does it?

Just like a glorious day, is the moon.
A moon is minor. a moon is mingy,
a moon is least, however.

Normal nighttime, however hard it tries,
Will always be rest.
Does the normal nighttime make you shiver?
does it?

How happy is the reminisce, thick twilight!
Does the thick twilight make you shiver?
does it?
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It does..I like it...

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3 years ago

thank yoou mommykim you are the only one who likes it hehe. I really appreciated your like.

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3 years ago

because it is really good the words you used are very in sync and the overall thought is beauiful

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3 years ago

hehe thank you po so much

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3 years ago

your always welcome baby!!

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