Her Silent Smile (Horror/Thriller Story 3rd Entry)
Prompts: **DREAM, TWISTED, SILENT, DARK, TERRIFY, COLD** Starts @ 11:32pm It was a boring rainy afternoon and I was alone at home. My parents went to a 2day trip outside the city. As a single child, I always left alone everytime the two lover birds are flying. But sometimes, my bestfriend Jade is coming over to be my company. We are like true sisters - I am Ruby, she is Jade, the two precious gems. I called her to stay overnight at home and we'll do movie marathon. While waiting, I prepared the chips and drinks on the center table in between the television and the sofa. I turned the lights off which made the house so **dark**, only the television was giving light in the living room. I almost finish the half bottle of soda but she's not around yet. I tried to call her, but she's not answering. The night was **cold** since it was raining outside. The wind blew through the half-opened window near the sofa. The cold wind sent shivers to my body and goosebumps appeared. The movie I was watching caught my interest. It's about R & J, the two bestfriends who never separated even until the death of the other one. It's entitled 7-days with you. J died in an accident while she's on her way to meet her bestfriend R. But R never knew about it until the 7th day when her mom called to inform her about J's death. It was **terrifying** yet a very sad story. I was about to fill-up my glass with water when a shadow passed by behind me. So I turned my head to see what it was. I was startled and surprised to see my bestfriend standing behind me that I almost drop my glass - she was pale and cold. The television light hits her face. She looks so blank and sick. Maybe she got soaked by the rain on her way. "How did you get in here?" She didn't reply, instead she smiled. I just thought, maybe my mom gave her our passcode. I took my towel and covered it on her body, she was really cold. We sat down on the sofa **silently** while drying her hair. She didn't talk at all, she wasn't the talkative Jade I've known for 20 years. I replayed the movie 7-days with you because she didn't watched yet. I was really worried on her because she looked sick. "Are you alright?" I asked her. Instead of replying, she just smiled again and leaned her head on my shoulders. My phone rings which made me jumped from my seat, it was my mother calling. Perhaps, Jade's sudden appearance made me easily get startled. "Hello mom?" She didn't talked at first, then I heard her sobbing. "Please brace yourself my dear. I got a call from your auntie," then she paused, I heard her crying. "What's wrong mom?" "Jade is...." Then I looked at Jade, she's still silent and cold. My heart suddenly beats so fast. "Jade looks sick mom.." Then she stopped from crying. "What do you mean? Her mom called and told me that she got stabbed by a pitpocketer on her way there." My eyes grew bigger and checked the side of her body for a sign of wound. Her clothes were soaked with blood. I got **twisted**. "Mom....." I was nervous and trembling. "Jade is dead on arrival at the hospital my dear" Then Jade stared at me sadly. Tears fell from her eyes. And I was facing my dead bestfriend. I hoped it was just a **dream**. Ends @ 11:42pm My last entry to @Jdine Horror/Thriller writing contest in her Thriller/Horror Stories (dc61) community. https://read.cash/@Jdine/birth-month-giveaway-cafcf129 I was bored so I made this and I remember tomorrow is the last day of your contest. Hope you like it. 😁
33 comments
This one was sas too but probably the best by far
Thanks for reading..haha
Uou have a thing for sad horror. Why is that?
So it's not that scary.. lol
Nope, it was creepy but still sad
Thanks..hehe
😂this is the best article that has kept my eyes glued. Wow terrific
I don't think so..haha..read my other Horror/Thriller articles.. 😁
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Thanks for the wonderful story, but the truth is death is inevitable.
Thanks for reading
Awesome
Thank you
Thanks for participating! Will add this the list.. :)
I know I won't win in that contest, but excited to see who are the winners and I'll read their stories. 😁
aw come on. you write great. you have chance hehe. Nd also people will be voting for the winners... hehe
Oh.. I read some and they're really great
yeah some are also great... But as Ive said people will still vote for their winners.. hehe... You can gather voters for your articles hehe
I thought you'll judge it..
i will for the finalists... then winners will be voted by everyone.. 😊
Thats good
Best of luck dear😍😍
Thanks
Welcome😍😍💕
I got goosebumps. With few words you relay your story completely. And it makes me feel sad for the two friends. I cant say I hope they will be together but I hope Ruby will not get angry at herself. Jade tried to see her and it was the reason for her death.
I appreciate it.. thnks for reading. I guess that's the true meaning of friendship. Hope you voted for that too. 😁😁 Please visit this link https://read.cash/@Jdine/voting-starts-now-contest-update-05f54373 Comment down done on that link so can receive tips
You started the story great, do have an interesting writing style but it feels as if something misses at the end. Perhaps you just told a hot too much and that's why? Good luck. 🍀👍
Because the time is up and need to end it already... can't think of any ending.. lol
If you cannot think of any ending do not end. Keep it open what happens.
Haha.. just like what I did with my first stories..
Vote for me.if you like it. 😁
I vote for the best one, read some more first.