@Jakir
Come on
Hi everyone! How are you? I hope that everyone is fine by the grace of Allah. I'm also fine. It's me @Jakir once again with poem which is written by me. This poem was written two months ago.This is also my favourite poem. The name of poem is **come on.** When I am free I sometimes sit down to write poetry, because I like to write.❤️ Now read start,,, ..."**Poem**"... If there is a void in the middle of the chest, If the face floats in the warmth of the heart, please come on. Come to the porch of my south door! Although there are no bed couches, the straw house, Even in the hot sun, the wind will blow! If you feel lonely thinking of the old days, If the cause causes tension in the chest, please come on. Come on in, take a look and enjoy yourself! Although modern life does not have the tools, I can still give you, The cold water of the lotus pond and the fresh vegetables of the field! If I remember to live, If remorse bites the conscience, Please come on. Come on, cut the thread of the magic net! Although I can't make up for lost time, Yet I will awaken love, Life is not too long, I will hug you again.💕
12 comments
Your poem writing quality is really so good...Thanks for sharing with us...I am waiting for your next poem..keep writing and keep sharing
Thank you so much dear for liked my poem. As always you appreciate to me so of course I will come again with new poem.😍😍
nice poem we want too see more😍
Thank you so much for appreciate to me. I will come back with new poem😌😍
i loved your way of writing... who can ignore such calls that is generated inside heart...if one loves you whatever your condition is he/she is to come to you..."cold water of lotus pond" one of the magical words in the poem...it touches the heart of a nature lover..💕
Thank you so much dear for your valuable comment. 😍😍 I'm really appreciate of this. I will come back with new poem again. Just connected with me.😊
This is my one of favourite poem dear😊 Thank you so much dear for your valuable comment. I'm inspired of your comment.💕
that's a great honour for me to inspire someone specially when he's a poet..
This some kinda poem that I will rate for B. For some reason that you might know as well.
I will try better of next time. Thank you so much dear😍☺️
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