Free writing for horror, 1st entry
My Submission to @Jdine 's Contest that should be posted in ****Thriller/Horror Stories (dc61)**** https://read.cash/c/thrillerhorror-stories-dc61 For the details on that contest, you could check here https://read.cash/@Jdine/birth-month-giveaway-d289b904 I just wanted to write horror in all honesty XD **Include 3 or more word prompts in your article. (DREAM, TWISTED, SILENT, DARK, TERRIFY, COLD)** Starto! There was always something with old towns. As much as the culture and traditions were ought to be treasured, the stares newcomers receive upon entering the gates fell all too dark. As a traveler, coming upon such lands were nothing new, in fact, the challenge and seeing how long I can manage to stay was always a fun thought. "Foreigners should just mind their own business" That was a tempting idea, I thought. but then, teasing these people seemed far more tempting. Each step I took into places of the village only seemed to annoy them more and more, each question I asked, their response grew **cold**. Each child and animal I tried to befriend. The adults would only look to me in terror. What did they see in me that **terrified** them... My days here turned to weeks and my weeks here seemed to last eternities. Yet all I see were the same people. No one new ever came. It was strange. It felt as though my days here were only just **dreams**. were they? The longer I stayed, the more **twisted** everything seemed. there was definitely something wrong with this village. I need to get out of here. I tried, I made a run for it in the **dark silence** of the night where no looks befell me. Strange, yet I could still feel their burning stares. As if their gaze followed me everywhere. As I approached the top of a hill I passed by to get here, I saw the last few scenes my eyes had the horror of seeing. It was a graveyard. It had so many tombs. I don't remember passing by here when I arrived. And in the midst of those graves stood a woman whom held a knife in her hand. She grinned wickedly at me as she approached. Had it not been for the fact that she had sent my head flying, I probably would have thought her beautiful with how the moon illuminated her distorted figures. Alas, I have joined those who resided in the village forever.
timer used: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PJeNXd0SZNc typed on laptop, did not edit besides my typos Start time: 4:45, ph time; end: 4:55. ph time
21 comments
holy fuck, the last part gave me chills. "I have joined those who resided in the village forever."
I think i told you. I love thriller and horror so much :") i grew up reading goosebumps and stephen king ❤
Nice, old classic SK. I'd suggest reading Junji Ito's works too. It just hits right in the spot.
I watched the anime but never read the manga. Heck ;;-;; it was creepy af that i can't even imagine looking at the manga
wow....! I'm speechless... Good job! This is a nice start for the contest. :) I'm amazed... :) It'll be nice if you put a title in it too... :)
I got too excited for horror ;-; I can't think of a not so cliche title for this? I'll think about giving it a title later on
no worries :)
Wow, this one is mind-blowing fiction 😊 Nice entry. I thought the protagonist survive but end up residing in the village too forever.
Stay tuned for my last 2 entries 😂 since i don't have creepy experiences, might as well keep doing fiction
Your imagination is wide because it's not easy to narrate a story without experience.
Maybe i experienced this in my past life? Lol but i do read a lot so that helps
Oh wow! "Had it not been for the fact that she sent my head flying..." that was the most beautiful and bone-chilling part. Strange little towns scare me a lot.
I think everyone hates old creepy towns but then it's mostly the atmosphere that makes it creepy
I read this just now. So you made 3 entries.. just wow!!
Yes i did ^-^ i love horror this much 😂
I hope I can get a nap at work
Errr.. Now you found out your dead. 😵
Yes UwU else it wouldn't be horror to me
I'm an old aged genaration... Whats UwU by the way.. 🤔
It's equivalent to this emoji 😊 but with cat mouth so it looks softer
Oooh i see.. Cats mouth huh.. UwU 🤣🤣🤣