Misunderstood creature

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3 years ago

[WP] The monster in the closet always makes one tremble. one day, you finally tell the the monster "Leave Creature" The monster answered back "But if I leave, who will protect you from the monsters"


It all started when Zach turned 5. Each night he would pester either of his parents if they could sleep in their room for that night. most of the time he would be allowed to but in times where his parents wanted nothing more than to have the room for themselves, he was left with no other choice but to sleep in his own room. It was either that or he would get yelled at and grounded. Of course being grounded was out of the question. He barely even lingered for more than 5 minutes in his room. He was always in a rush to leave, the moment he entered.

At some point, his parents offered to install a night light but as soon as the door was closed, the night light only made things worse for him. It illuminated it more than he wanted. He could always still see it, the glowing red eyes that could still be seen from the closet door gratings. It was worse when he or his mom forgot to close the closet too. In those rare instances, he could clearly see the black figure that seemed to blend into the darkness of the night. The spikes along its spines, the large horns that might as well could pierce the door and the claws... The large blade-like claws that looked like it could kill an animal with ease.

For years and years, Zach lived in fear of his own room that he even asked if he could live in the basement instead but numerous times he would just be told to stay in his room and to stop making a fuss. For 5 years, the fear continued. Zach had turned 10 and he was then told that he should start facing his fears. And that he did.

One night he flung the closet door open and there a pair of eyes glowing red greeted him.

"Leave Creature"

The creature looked intently at Zach and to the boy's surprise, the creature looked saddened.

"If I leave... Who will protect you from the monsters?" Its voice was deep. And resonated terrifyingly so in the room. It was enough to send anyone on a run for their lives but Zach needed to stay firm and as much as he trembled and his fake courage was leaving his body, he needed the creature gone

"You're the monster here! Leave my closet! Go find somewhere else to go"

"But I've always protected you... You used to sleep with me"

"Sleep with a monster? ME? You must be mistaken."

"I used to be your favorite sleeping buddy and protector.."

The creature moved. It stepped out of the closet and if Zach thought it was already big, it doubled in size when it stood outside of the closet. The sight gave him chills and as creature reached for the boy, he made a run for it and escaped the room as soon as he could. Creature just stood there, gazing out the door Zach left from.

When morning came, Zach's parents found the boy had fallen asleep on the couch. He had tried to explain what had happened that night but his mother just got frustrated and guided him back to his room.

In the middle of his room, there lay a crochet doll that his late grandmother had given him so many years ago.

"Hey Zach, look. It's creature. The one nana gave you"

He took the doll in his hands and observed it intensely. The red beaded eyes, the black body, the plush spikes and horns that probably couldn't pierce anything. It looked different from how he had remembered it. Different from the monster that hid in his closet too.

"Maybe that's the monster you've been seeing so much" His mother said with a chuckle as she left Zach to get ready for the day

"Were you the creature in the closet?" No response. "Of course you aren't. a doll can't protect me" He placed the doll back down on his bedside table, maybe it wouldn't bother him that much if it were in plain sight.

That night, no creature stood watch in the closet.

"Looks like we can finally eat, boys" A sinister voice echoed in the room, accompanied with chilling whispers and murmurs

"W-Who are you!" Zach had immediately jumped into bed, pulling the covers high to cover himself

"WE.. We are the monsters your friend had warned you about" At that instant, Zach looked at the creature doll that sat idly on his bedside table "Too bad you sent him away"

He wanted to make a run for it but before his feet could even land on the floor, a black tentacle wrapped around his ankle and dragged him under the bed. Screams were the last thing Creature ever heard from his master.

As the real monsters devoured the boy, A single tear fell from his eye. He couldn't protect his beloved master.

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Well it reminds me of my little experience as a child I hate the fake dear!!!

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3 years ago

At first i thought it's an article bout cat haha, i mean most ppl think a cat is ungrateful creature and a bossy one haha great story as expected from nee sanπŸ’›

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3 years ago

I'm scared of monsters out of the closet

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3 years ago

Ehh not all of them will be out to harm you so i don't think there's a reason to be scared

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3 years ago

Such a sad ending. Breaks my heart πŸ˜­πŸ’”

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3 years ago

Your message is hidden... I hope you are not one of those spammed automatically.

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3 years ago

I think I am. I don't know why😭😭😭😭😭

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3 years ago

Email Simon, many users are still experiencing this. It happened to me once.

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3 years ago

That's hello@read.cash right?

I have...

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3 years ago

Was also surprised when your comment was spammed OnO you shoild email simon-san

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3 years ago

Yes, thank you. I just sent an email. Asides the spam, I haven't been tipped for days now

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3 years ago

It did but zach was a judgy kid. He should have believed creature when it said it was protecting him

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But then, lol how could he?? If I were in his shoes I wouldn't have believed either πŸ˜‚

Such a scary looking guardian. Just noπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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3 years ago

Well if it's been there for so long and it hasn't done any harm to you. I think it's worth believing?

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3 years ago

So sad.. But some protector really looks like a monster πŸ˜…

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3 years ago

Yes they do but we shouldn't just judge them like that

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3 years ago

Great dear I have subscribed you dear friend could live in the basement instead but numerous times he would just be told to stay in his room and to stop making a fuss. For 5 years, the

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3 years ago

It's like the lizard from the Disney movie. The one that the little girl was afraid of until the blue teddy appeared. But in this case he did not end up happy and less when they looked for the child later.

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3 years ago

Ahh randall. From monsters inc. I can't recall that ge ever looked terrifying to me. He was just mean because he hung out with the wrong kind of crowd

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3 years ago

Yes, yes, that movie. the blue kitty was good and mike too but ... In fact the lizard was so bad that the girl was afraid of it. And in the end they sent him to a swamp where they mistake him for a lizard fish and beat him hahaha. I love that movie.

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3 years ago

Well he got what he deserved but that was his fault anyways. I enjoyed that muvie so much and monster university too! The origin story was far more amusing

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3 years ago

I like to watch those movies because our imaginations fly and we create our own stories.

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3 years ago

Oh boy, that was sad. He wronged his protector.

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3 years ago

Yeah ;;-;; just because creature looked scary, doesn't mean creature is bad

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3 years ago

It's the same as people. Not because they are ugly and we judged them badly.

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3 years ago

No offense but the ugly people are sometimes the kind ones though

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3 years ago

I agree so people should not be judgemental. They didn't choose their image, it's natural. It's the character that matters most.

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