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The Impact Of Alcohol..
Hello everyone, it's Dangerous_Fly again on this .. I wish to participate in the free writing contest and this looks more unless like my first entry.. Topic: The impact of alcohol. Highlights used: people, charming, support, ashes, release. **Note: I typed these after my time was out, hope it is not a problem. I mean the highlights used ..** Let's dive in. Have you ever come across a drunkard who has fallen in a gutter before?? It looks pathetic as to how these **people** have ruined their lives and burnt their future into **ashes**. Their **charming** looks begin to turn into something else and also their activities look upsurd. They continue to suffer this fate because they continue these attitudes without stop. They then need **support** to get them out of these situations and **release** them from this burden upon their heads since some might want to stop but can't . Let's all help fight against alcoholism because it really affects the individual.. Thank you.. Start time : 6:55 GMT End time :. 7:05 GMT Device used : Mobile Timer : My mom's phone
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It's really good. But I think, 10 mintues is not enough for writing a article. 😐
It was a challenge so I had to use 10 minutes.. I will bring out a full one that I will prepare soon
Yes. I want to read a full article from you. Thank you.
But you can read some of my Articles . https://read.cash/@Dangerous_Fly
I must read your article. Keep writing.
Wow 😮 You really did a nice article only at 10minutes, I don't think my entry for free writing was a good one. But Yours is really great !
Apparently it's perplex and not people. The keywords are confusing ;-;
She said it is people.. @wakeupkitty
I'm not sure anymore... because she left a comment on mine asking if i used grammarly and saying it changes perplex into people and vice versa? So I'm confused ;-;
https://read.cash/c/alcohol-effects-c5c2/post-11b117a0 Check the comments here
She said the same thing 😂 then I guess we're in the right direction with what we're doing
It's actually perplex. The word perplex changes to the word people when using Grammarly. I think she was mistaken when she wrote the rules on the 1st Contest Freewriting. I was confused at first but eventually clarified that it is perflex.
Are you sure? Check the comment in the link @Dangerous_Fly sent. She also said it's people
I actually read that a few minutes ago. Indeed it was kind of confusing now. 😅 but if you use that plus 3 more prompts then I guess it's okay. As for my first entry, I only used 3 prompts and it included people. Unfortunately, perhaps I lose 33.33% chance of winning. We can only submit 3 right? Hahaha.
Yeah, just 3 attempts at this so we all have 2 more tries to get this right 😂 i wonder with other people and the prompt word though. A lot used people, a lot used perplex
Then I will give it a second try but at least I have 4 more highlights in there so this is okay
Yes. I think this is okay because you used more than 3 prints. Good on you! 😅
Nice one. I haven't created my entry yet. Doesn't have the right mood yet. Maybe I should stop using wesing app for a moment hahaa
It's short but it's very clear all of it.. I like this one. Nice writing. Congrats in advance to all participants.
Great idea about the effects of alcohol. Good luck to us😊 Support each other.
Alcohol’s impact on your body starts from the moment you take your first sip. While an occasional glass of wine with dinner isn’t a cause for concern, the cumulative effects of drinking wine, beer, or spirits can take its toll. A glass a day may do little damage to your overall health. But if the habit grows or if you find yourself having a hard time stopping after just one glass, the cumulative effects can add up. Digestive and endocrine glands Drinking too much alcohol can cause abnormal activation of digestive enzymes produced by the pancreas. Buildup of these enzymes can lead to inflammation known as pancreatitis. Pancreatitis can become a long-term condition and cause serious complications. Inflammatory damage The liver is an organ which helps break down and remove harmful substances from your body, including alcohol. Long-term alcohol use interferes with this process. It also increases your risk for chronic liver inflammation and liver disease. The scarring caused by this inflammation is known as cirrhosis. The formation of scar tissue destroys the liver. As the liver becomes increasingly damaged, it has a harder time removing toxic substances from your body. Liver disease is life-threatening and leads to toxins and waste buildup in your body. Women are at higher risk for developing alcoholic liver disease. Women’s bodies are more likely to absorb more alcohol
Wow , well said . I love It
Wow! Awesome write-up, the way you composed your article using prompts are so good.
Well done. It counts. Nearby me live drunks. One still owns a house, no doors left, no electrivity,power. Somehow he survives on alcohol and an apple once in a while. He once offered me one while I waited in my car for being his gf (read: sex). No thanks. 🥴