Hi @AskTheBMP !
It has been a pleasure creating this as an entry to your ongoing logo "contest".
Here is what I could create though and I think it is worth considering..
I also made a Black & White of the logo..πππ
Here are the links to download both logos in both SVG and PNG..
SVG:
https://mega.nz/folder/QIRwjKiY#SbBkdZDpdJ8Q52KHromX8g
PNG:
A silver colour would have been captivating