Still
**Before the cruel, penetrating eyes** **I stand, frozen ;** **Fearful of how one mistake** **Could be the death of mine.** **Barely moving, I lower my eyes** **From their piercing gaze.** **Almost certain that I** **Will not live to see this** **End,** **From even now,** **I am still.** Inspired by dear @Dolores . Thanks alot for the poem writting contest.
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nice one..recently i learned about Found poetry..i have to pick some words from a poem and make a new meaningful poem..i wish to make one using yours..
Wow.. that's a good initiative. Go ahead love π It's much more better than doing that boring classes π
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Best of luck dear for your beautiful poem and also for the beautiful poem contest which is announced by @Dolores. Thanks a lot @Dolores for your great initiative dear.
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beautifully depicted π actually this happens to me when i stand in front of my daddy..π
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You're good in expressing yourself
Hope so π
Very nice, keep posting friend.