My Journey to NoWhere: Part 1

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4 years ago

This is the story of a young man who sought for a treasure in a desert in the continent Africa. All he wanted was just to gather all the gold he wanted but his greed surpassed his energy.

He met a group of people along the road to seek for direction. The first person he met was a transporter.

1st conversation

The young man: Hey there do you know where I am heading to?

The transporter: I don't really understand what you are saying you are going to a place you aren't aware of.

The young man: Please just tell me where I am heading to, where am I and where next.

The transporter: you are on your way to the land of lost gold

The smile on his face was at full length, then he continued his journey to no where.

He was tired and hungry So he set a camp fire and killed a sindwinder snake so he can eat.

He was lucky not to be swallowed by other creatures in the desert at night. He woke up and continued his Voyager to get his treasures. He found a poor man who had nothing to give and nothing to take. The young man started asking questions on where the land of lost gold is.

The young man: where is it, where is the land of lost gold.

Poor Man: you should go home and forget it, you can never get it. I spent my life looking for what is not mine and what is not there. It has been left there for ages, leave it and flee.

Young Man: my journey and yours are different you are old and useless. You do not have enough energy to dig neither can you see well. I won't die here like you.

The young man continued his journey to the place of his dreams.

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4 years ago

Thanks I have already seen and commented don't you receive notifications from me

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4 years ago

I do not understand this story. The introduction to it doesn't make sense with the rest of the tale. Sounds to me the young man is deaf and his IQ isn't on a high level. He clearly doesn't understand searching your whole life means you are getting old.

As a moderator of (short) stories/Tales: this story isn't written clearly enough and finished. Please, read the rules of the community before you submit. We only approve the finished stories. Follow-ups are not practical for readers.

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