I tried to hold on

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4 years ago
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I tried to hold on.

But life didn’t stay the same.

I look back at the past ,

where a part of me

will always remain .

I find comfort in knowing

that fleeting moments

live on in old photo albums

and picture frames .

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The subject of the poem is good but good would be too if you, especially if it's about such a short poem, make every word count and do take care of Grammarly and the title you choose. This is an important part of poetry.

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User's avatar wakeupkitty
4 years ago

Yes, I understand.. Sorry for my all mistake and Thank you so much for you suggestions.. 🌸

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User's avatar Bithan
4 years ago

Just puzzle a bit on the words, try the free app Grammarly. I think more will start reading you than. 🍀

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User's avatar wakeupkitty
4 years ago

Ok.. I will write it from now on..^_^

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User's avatar Bithan
4 years ago
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