4
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I tried to hold on.
But life didn’t stay the same.
I look back at the past ,
where a part of me
will always remain .
I find comfort in knowing
that fleeting moments
live on in old photo albums
and picture frames .
The subject of the poem is good but good would be too if you, especially if it's about such a short poem, make every word count and do take care of Grammarly and the title you choose. This is an important part of poetry.