A walk Through Time

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3 years ago

Brad seems happy , as he is going to buy a cake for christmas eve and he is walking on the thronging streets of Mexico city on auspicious day of christmas .

Brad is 20 year old boy,who is college drop out and he just have one purpose in life to add no purpose to it.His family is worried about him every time, his mom and dad had realized how they have turned their son into a snob , brad just relentlessly spends money of his rich dad , if there was a subject of time management in academics then brad would have miserably failed it too.

Brad has value for time,what he believe is that every kne has to die someday then wasting life working for something that you already have.

Brad has buyed a cake and is walking his way back to home,he is using his phone with one hand and other one is engaged in holding the cake.

A man in white suit,white hat with a locket in his neck is walking with a real high velocity , as he keeps walking he collides with brad .

Brad after seeing his cake has  just fallen and his phone too, tries to stop the man but he was so fast that he has just disappeared.

Brad looks perplexed and more of angry, he goes and buys a new cake , the former one just bursted in the box.

Brad reaches home puts the cake on the table and  moves upstairs in hurry,

Brad to his mom"just don't disturb me mom, i am going to be busy up there"

His mom to him"its christmas eve ,you must be down here with your family "

Brad with loud pitch"ok finee...family dramas...i will come in 1 hour "

Brad reaches his room puts his phone on his desk and turns behind to find his charger,

His phone rings *ting*

Brad is perplexed "that's not my phone's notification sound"

Brad turns back and sees it's not his phone,, brad huffs and shouts " oh damm it that man ....just stoled my expensive phone.

Phone rings again*ting*

Brad with anger looks down "now who is messaging on this dam stone age time phone,

Brad reads the message one by one"hello brad pucovaski"

Brad looks astonished

Reads the second one"the phone is not that old brad it's i phone 7 , 4 version older than your phone"

Brad texts back"who the hell are you, you are doing a big mistake , you are gonna pay heavy for this "

Phone rings back,brad reads "wanna play a game, it's name is walking through the time"

Brad starts typing but wait what ...in suddenly the phone starts pulling brad inside it ......Brad seems scared "hey somebody help me.... mom,dad heellllpppppp.........m.....and he get Completely immersed in the phone.

Brad is sitting in his room only,

Brad seems perplexed, a boy comes from the door , he looks tensed and stressed .....he slaps himself and sits on the bed and then suddenly ties a loop of rope on the fan and suicide..brad shouts"No...wait don't do it ....wait you are doing it wrong brad"

Brad sighs and seems astounded"where am i , was that boy really me,(brad shouts) hey can somebody hear me ...can somebody......."

Brad fells into a pit and then comes out from the other end , falls on the sofa , it seems like a big house, with all the luxury....brad seems too much confused and suddenly the bell rings...a old lady goes to open the door....some mens with guns enters and start threatening and breaking things ,shouting and asking the lady where is your son, a young man comes down from the stair , he tries to convince the goons that he will return the money he had taken from them....situation gets tensed.....

Brad shouts "no don't shoot..." but nobody can listen him ...he again try to take the gun from goons but nothing seems working,...one of the goon shoots both the young man and the old lady...they both dies....brad sighs looks horrified "no....what is this happening....where am i ...the man ..the man it was me and i just got mom killed ...no ,no "

Brad fells into a pit again....

A beautiful young lady with sparkling blue eyes and short blonde hairs is holding a baby ...... a man comes from behind.....says sorry to the woman that he is not able to get the food and the job....the woman slaps the man ...says her child is hungry she needs food for him....woman walks up the stairs and jumps down from the third floor of the house ..... the man gets emotionally broken so bad , that he just suicides too.....saying "i am sorry mom and dad "

Brad sighs seems more horrified than ever ,tears felling from the eyes...."i am sorry god ...that i just disrespected my parents,i showed off in front of those who can't even afford a single meal, i relentlessly wasted my time, i disobeyed my parents ,i am so ..sorry god..."

Brad falls into a pit again....

This time falls from the other end of the pit to a garden ....where a couple is celebrating the birth of a child and that's none other than brad....

Brad moves forward towards them....

A voice from behind"this was the most happiest moment in their life "

Brad looks behind, " you are that man ....that i collided with on the street....who are you?"

The man smiles and puts his hand around Brad's shoulder and walks forward with him"i was watching you , how you just misunderstood the meaning of life...,how you wasted your precious time that you can't have back ..."

Brad with astonishment "where are we?"

The man replies"all the three times you saw yourself , it was your alternate possibility of life..of future....this is how your life was gonna end....are you sure that's what a happy ending is like ?"

Brad replies"no, i realized how wrong i have been doing things , taking things in the wrong way i am so sorry about it"

The man replies with a smile"i am glad that you understood it you still have the opportunity to make your future better , will you ?"

Brad replies with a smile" yeah sure, but i just wanna ask you one question are you god?"

The man smiles and disappears....

Brad's mom shouts from the downstairs ....come downstairs brad ....it's time now.......brad wakes up and finds everything normal ....and his phone also back ...he smiles and moves downstairs and kisses his mom on forehead and hug her........

Brad relealised the meaning of life and the value of time....

Brad's dad john pucoviski in his room shaking hands with a man in white suit ,and white hat with A iPhone 7"thank you so much .....brad ...i think this was the only way to correct him"

The man repies "yes dad...the future has not been kind with me and i wanted it too correct it to rebuild it by making my older me realize what's important in life..."

They both hug each other .......and the future brad leaves the place by clicking on his phone....

Future brad enters back to his timeline that is 2050 hoping that the things would have changed as he has manipulated with the timeline.....and he seems happy to see his mom on wheel chair and his wife with his son in his big luxurios house.....

"Every minute is a precious gift of god, it only take only few seconds to thank him for that".

"REALIZE THE VALUE OF LIFE AND THE VALUE OF WHO GAVE IT TO YOU ,BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE..."

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This is a very mind boggling story. I love the twist, plots and turns.

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3 years ago

That's a nice story there. Brad had a chance to contemplate by having a conversation with God. ❤

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3 years ago

Nice.

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3 years ago

Good ✌👏👏

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