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How about this for a paragraph from my latest novel. Wrote it today so i think my brain must be getting better. "No one can keep up such an intense level of vituperation and inevitably while she was still speaking it seemed steadily, but noticeably, her vehemence lost some of its fervency and at that point she asked Dominika to help and guide her with what she wanted to do next. " ... and yes I did know what all the words meant beforehand.
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Good morning and a wonderful week to you my friend! My English aren't that good to tell you if this is correct or not, but I like the meaning of it !
Dot after fervency and another sentence? I mean, to understand better the story
it has crossed my mind but think that it might break up the continuity. the conjunction keeps the narrative flowing but i ageee the sentence is a little overlong and may need a little bit of a rework 😊
Say what? To misquote Dr Seuss, I prefer little words, like “if” and “it”. Those multisyllabic monstrosities scramble my brain!
Oh I use plenty of them too. My next quote will be of much more simpler English lol