@rah 5 August 2021 more from that month

So today I decided to share part of my submission letter for my manuscript for the first novel with you. As you know it was accepted so I must be doing something right I have removed spoilers "I shared the manuscript with three acquaintances and all three encouraged me to publish. The first, a female, described the story as arousing, authentic and enthralling. The first male said it was engaging and admitted that he cried unashamedly at the moment ____SPOILER_____. The other male enjoyed the erotica, but found [the protagonist's] emotional journey even more compelling. He walked every single step with her and felt her pain throughout. Later he was filled with joy from the moment when _____SPOILER____ all the way to the last page.