@marcmire
The Fall.
๐๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐. ๐๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ด๐ต๐ถ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฐ๐ณ๐ฏ ๐๐ค๐ข๐ณ๐ถ๐ด ๐ง๐ญ๐ฆ๐ธ ๐ต๐ฐ๐ฐ ๐ค๐ญ๐ฐ๐ด๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ด๐ถ๐ฏโ๐ด ๐จ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ข๐ต ๐ญ๐ถ๐ฎ๐ช๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ด๐ค๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ค๐ฆ ๐ข๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ต ๐ฉ๐ช๐ด ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ช๐ด๐ฆ. ๐๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฑ๐ต๐ข๐ต๐ช๐ฐ๐ฏ, ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ด๐ฑ๐ช๐ต๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ธ๐ข๐ณ๐ฏ๐ช๐ฏ๐จ, ๐ข๐ณ๐ฆ ๐ธ๐ฆ ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฏ๐ต ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ธ๐ข๐ฏ๐ต ๐ฎ๐ฐ๐ณ๐ฆ? Wings as white as a doveโs feather, To ever fly to the sky higher, The purity and magnificence shines, That even the gods envy thine. The burden of the process to makeโ The perfect quality; a pleasing sanctity No matter how much time it takes, To maximize the artistโs creativity. He shall take the fall! To those who want it all! Desecrating the balance of scales, He who shall turn frail! Heed the warning, For there is no greater than the turning, Of what is beyond the future, Devoured by the sea, never to recover. II. Selfishness that infects the soul, But we merely are fools, Desperately giving in to demons, Foreshadowed with euphoric intentions, A psychedelic admonition, Giving death a ticket for deadly attrition. ๐๐ฆโ๐ญ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐ฏ๐ญ๐บ ๐ญ๐ฆ๐ข๐ณ๐ฏ ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ข๐ฅ๐ฐ๐ณ๐ฆ, ๐๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ฏ ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ข๐ต๐ฉ ๐ช๐ด ๐ฌ๐ฏ๐ฐ๐ค๐ฌ๐ช๐ฏ๐จ ๐ข๐ต ๐ฐ๐ถ๐ณ ๐ฅ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ณ. **Marcmire**ย ๐ฌ
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Your article is cool !
Thank you!
I am not sure. Death is my best friend, always present. ๐๐๐
Always. โค๏ธ๐ฌ
Wooooaaah! Oh my, I have lost words to describe your poem. It's just so deep. It talks about how frail one can be, the desires that sometimes can do you no good, the greed that can corrupt the essence of the soul and then regrets for we cant turn back time and do what's just right for the situation. Have I got anything right with what I understood in your piece? It's so deep that I doubt I have given the right reflection.
Exactly, good observation. To spice things up, imagine the narrative by imagining the demise of Icarus and the horror of Daedalus when he found out his son fell to his death.
I do admire that story. I actually have written a poem about that too , entitled "What IF Icarus Fell, For He Was Inlove?" , it's quite a tragic story with a bit of a different perspective haha. I've written it months ago. Tho I haven't published it here.
I would love to read it.
I'll look for it in my files and let you know when I published it๐