@lioness777
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Sweet Goodbye
I wrote this one just now, spontaneously without checking my grammar ,spelling or anything. I just want to express what I'm feeling right now. Im falling apart, I want to scream, I want to cry but no more tears falling from my eyes. This is the only way I could cry my heart out. Farewell The Gloomy sky is waving goodbye, The frowning clouds began to cry. The wilting flowers in the bend Know that it is near end The trees are all weeping It is time to stop pretending The sun is losing all its might Feel the weakening of its light Sometimes we just have to accept that even the great sun must set As they say all stories must end. Maybe for us my sweet, this is the end I bid you farewell and wish you well Farewell my love, farewell my friend For us this is the end.
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Oh common don't end it.. it's to sad for having farewell.. but oh I like your poem And I'm happy that you'rewriting again . 😊😊..
I guess it's for the best sis. I'm exhausted 😔😢
No worries.. I'm always here waiting foe the time you'll make a new article. 😊😊.
Thank you so much sis. This makes me feel better. Feel appreciated.
Always welcome... 😊
OMG. that feeling is a blessing in disguise. Why? because you wrote a very nice poem. Each lines shows what you really felt when you wrote this. @Jane , do you agree with me ? :) haha. I think so because you gave upvotes.😅 With regards to your feeling, @lioness777, I understand it but I know God gave that situation and heartache for you to be more stronger. Just feel the pain and after that, you will be okay again and you will be braver to face a new day comes to your life. Maybe it takes some time but it will be definitely happen one day.😊😊
Hi dear. Thank you for the advice. Really needed that coz right now I feel like Im so alone, feeling so down and confuse. This makes me feel a bit better.
We're here, your virtual friends to help you and remember that you're not alone. God is always with you :)
Thank you again dear...
no worries :)
Yes dear.. I agree with you.. this woman is really a great writer.. she just needs some time to practice it. 😊 and sorry for my late response.. I read this notif just now. 😅
haha. it's fine coz' I'm quite busy too and always receive lots of notif. hahaha
Can't even all during spare time..hehe..
Wow..
😯😯😯😯👏👏👏👏 You have a talent dear, give me some please 🙏 woww
Thank you dear. Just want to express what Im feeling. Didnt know it would come up like that. Was even crying when Im writting it. Anyway I know you can also write you just have to believe that you can do it. Just give it a try sis. Don't limit yourself into something because your afraid to try it.