Lucid Dream
You never talked to me the same way I do to you Your lips never spit sugar-coated words the way others do You never look at me the way I look at you Like I'm seeing the moon kissing the Earth You never think of me the way I am doing right now– and most of the times like you are an unsolved puzzle haunting me You never speak of me to anyone unlike me– who speaks about you to my favorite persons like you are a dream– Oh yes you are One that'll never come true You never loved me You didn't 'cause you're wide awake while I overslept ..dreaming written : 01/21/19 If you liked this poem, you may like and subscribe 🤗 You can also leave meaningful comments. They'll be so much appreciated! ❤️ Thank you 😘 I'm also glad to join **"Get Sponsored !!"** community. https://read.cash/c/get-sponsored-2a0b The idea of community is to sponsor quality content creators & reward community members for their activities. Join if you want to **"Get Sponsored !!"** https://read.cash/c/get-sponsored-2a0b Thank you **@Ashma** for giving us such opportunity 🤗 https://read.cash/@Ashma
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"'cause you're wide awake while I overslept ..dreaming" This line hit hard.
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That is an interesting poem. One that .any will make think. I hope some more people will read and reward you for this. The last sentence/ending is a strong one.... although... If the "I" was only dreaming it wasn't noticed what was really going on. @heartbeat1515 what do you say? 👍💕🍀
thank you very much for this 😭❤️
your comment really made me happy ❤️
And if I may say this, that's why the title is Lucid Dream, because in lucid dreams, the dreamer is aware that he/she is dreaming :)
This is surely an interesting one. It reminds me of my younger sister, the one who is brave enough to express her feelings to the one she like without caring about the possibility to be rejected.
And I admire your sister for her bravery 🤗👍❤️
You made me smile. It felt like that person is standing right in front of you. You just need a few second braveries to go and talk to him at least.
Thank you, I actually wrote this for my crush but that was a year ago, I don't like him anymore 😆
😅😅 Did you ever let him know your feeling?
No, he's actually a college crush. We're on the same college, but different course so I didn't really had a chance to talk to him. 😆
I see. Thank you for sharing.
You're welcome 😊 Thank you also 😊