It seems like my writing style is not that good as they said, and it seems like I need to refrain or stop first to improve lol. I don't want to repeat the same mistakes because of that, Subjectively, I'm being uncomfortable to my relentless mistakes on writing articles when they're not frankly complimenting it. Moreover, it sounds like I'm required to refrain, and I thought that my writing style seems not boring, but it's not. Here are the things that I shall improve. 1) Avoid using transitional words unneccessarily. I'm having a hard time to regret it because I thought that it is helpful to make my article longer. 2. Reduce using adverbs and don't be longer comfortable with it. Okay, I'm certain that I'm occurring this most likely but it looks like I need to reduce what I'm uttering. Sorry for being boring once again. Need to fix the modules first.
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Your style is okay.. But as what crimsonowl said, you're using too many adverbs 😅 I noticed that too.. Maybe you can just reduce not refrain.. The rest is fine.