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"Man to Nature"
"Man to Nature" the world was build with nature it was peaceful and was nurtured it was bright and beautiful making the earth look colorful when the man came everything started to change from fun to lame and things started to feel strange the places that was once filled with trees is now furnished with buildings and houses making the earth loses its resources that makes the people develop deseases the changes that man brought to the nature made the place broken for the future if the man knows how to protect and preserved the world would still be nurtured -Zai🍀
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Nice one, but I feel you are giving more emphasis on rhyming. And there is break in rhyming too. And what I believe is poem are flow of ones emotions , not of rhymes. Only my personal opinion.