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Pain of love
Your loved one is not trying to give you time but he give time to the Friends and he keeps you away with the excuse of other busy. You're upset! The worst thing will be gone. The day he's gonna start with the bad heart. He's not a good thing you miss him now. As much as you're sitting with, But he's not even in his mind, Your Philings didn't try to understand, That's exactly what he's gonna be with him one day, It's not what you want. That day you'll be treating her like him And he's like you. No one ever gets through pain, Revenge of Nature says something! That's what you're gonna do. You'll get what you want to get back here!!!
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> Your Philings didn't try to understand, I wonder what do you mean by phillings? I can feel the emotion inside this poetry but I am a bit confused with the sentences. May I know if you used a translator for this poem?
I have the same questions. "Phillings"? I advise you to use Grammarly and have a second look at what you wrote. Half the way it starts looking good and the poetry atmosphere comes into it but the start?
Since this is already accepted in another community, we have to reject it from ours. We are sorry.