The Reign of Rain
The crack of thunder woke him up from his midday slumber. *Thunder in the middle of the afternoon?* He briefly glanced outside his window to see that the skies had turned grey and the clouds looked heavy, almost pregnant with cold liquid that would ruin his plans of going out. He checked the time on his phone: 1:14pm. His laptop was still on and he was on his Browser application. He squinted his eyes as he looked closely and saw it was Read.Cash. Damn! He thought. Before the brief spell of drowsiness overcame him, he'd wanted to write an article, but a lack of inspiration made that impossible. He stands up, stretching and hearing cracks here and there as gas bubbles pop in the synovial membrane around his joints. He was supposed to be out this day, but the rain had fallen. He was almost grateful; going out with a face mask on was becoming a pain, but the Government wasn't hearing any of it. With hungry, hefty-bribe-collecting police officers on patrol, the safest place to be was at home. The rain was now falling with reckless abandon. A constant pitter-patter of raindrops on his roof drowned out the Afro Pop music he was trying to listen to. Undoubtedly, it was time to write something, and this was affirmed by a brief spell in which the rain ceased, and then rapidly increased in crescendo. He slowly typed away at the laptop, pausing once a while to listen for changes in the rainfall. None. When he was done, he hit the send button as he turned on the water heater. A hot shower would restore his body to factory settings.
*************************** **This is me, and it's based on how I felt as the rain began to fall. I think I write poetry, but in a prose form :I**
13 comments
Weldone๐
Thanks!
I think this one could use some editing. Would be nice if you checked what you wrote. Still not using Grammarly or a slow wifi too? I wonder where you intended to go to. ๐
Wow, I think I'll get some eyeglasses. I could've sworn I looked through this article twice. I guess I'll install Grammarly extension for Chrome. You do have eagle eyes ๐ And yes, when the rain falls, the connection is really bad. So I'll have to hope Grammarly works well. I wanted to go visit a friend with some friends, but I guess the weather wasn't in support.
I have the same. I read three times, edit even more, and as soon I reread it I see the mistakes. Perhaps your wifi is slow too. Grammarly makes a mess out of my text if I use it with a slow connection. Still two spoiled books to edit thanks to this tool ๐
Wow. And during this rainy season, I can't be assured of a good connection. I'll just have to use it anyway, and then make final checks myself. Two spoiled books? Wow.
Yes, two spoiled books and I can't say I am happy with it. At times I drive around for a better connection but it's bad everywhere in this corner.
Tough luck. It's amazing you still manage to do a great job with your work. ๐ค
I am a very stubborn person if it comes to things I want, need or like to do ๐
Well done๐ค
This is not a poem to me. It sounded more like a diary if you put in the date. For freewriting, did I miss out the details? Did you start writing at 1.14? What time did you stop?
Yes I guess I started at 1:14, and I must have ended about 7 or 8 minutes later
If you're writing for free writing community, you need to check your timer. I will let the admin decide on this.