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You can't control how other people receive your energy. Anything you do or say gets filtered through the lence of whatever personal shit they are going through at the moment. Which is not about you. Just keep doing your thing with as much integrity and love as posible. Here presenting a "**Prayer"** Oh god! Hear my prayer As you are so dear, I can remember you You are always new I want to meet you When i stand before a view I feel your being In the nearest everything As you are my creator Please torn me into greater In every walk of my life And lead me to a peaceful life. @avie018 arranged a poetry contest to write a poem. Please check this link to get more information. https://read.cash/@avie018/poetry-contest-9e640213
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Change the 1st line...Hear my prayer. It sounds good and maintains the rhythm too
Thank you so much vaiya. Thanks for the beautiful line
I think that suits and maintains the meaning, but the one you used is not right pattern
Which one vaiya?
My prayer hear
Maybe it should be “hear my prayer?” Am I right?
yes...check my comment. I suggested her. but she didn't understand
Oho vaiya ami sotti e etokhon bhujte pari nai j kon line change korte bolchilen. Matro bujhte parchi Dekhen to thik ase kina!
ok..prob nai
Thanks for you suggestion. Jihan suggested me that line before your suggestion but i didn't understand. It was my mistake☺☺.
It's OK. 😇
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Seriously i couldn't understood when you said. Some minutes ago i read again your comment in that time i understand. And edited the line. Again thanks
Hear my prayer hbe...ekhn thik ache. My prayer hear er meaning nai
A beautiful poem.
Thank you for your valuable comment
> Thank you for your valuable comment Thanks!
Welcome
That's nice.
Thanks
Amen 😊
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