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The Dreaming leaf
🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁 Swayed by the turmoil of the wind Leaf dreams as if her stem will snap Swayed by the turmoil of the wind Leaf dreams as if her branches will snap Wind blew like a gushing tornado Skies emit a rainfall pushing and pushing Leaf was tired but still standing Leaf was being blown away but still standing Sun arose and shine it’s light The crowns of light emit warm rays Giving vigorous energy Giving enormous synergy As if the leaf woke up from a dream of storm As if the leaf become awake from the sun
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Nice poem.. Words on point, with good rhymes, you can check mine tho, I guess I'd go into writing poems.
Ok sure
this is very nice. i like it. but i think you should work on making that longer a bit more
Haha I’m doing it fast
lol really? well you have a talent obviously! just work on it. you are good already
I am planning to make some novel 🤔
interesting! what kind of novels? i would say romance if i had to make a guess haha
Still deciding.
okay. good luck! i hope i will be able to read it as soon as possible :D
I despise romance, for me it’s full of manipulation and control.
well actually i hate romance too! but i'm kinda surprised that you despice it. i might be wrong but i can feel some romance in your articles.
I always see writing poems as something hard tho.. Like you guys have the time to think and write something lol
Me I don’t 🤔
I am impressed by this one. This is food for the mind and soul. 💕
Hmmm did you get the intelligence of the symbolisms my mind played with?
Escribes tan natural que las palabras son como susurros en el viento que viajan y llega a nuestros oídos para suavizar los pensamientos con el calor del Sol.
las palabras se canalizan a través de la inteligencia
I have been reading this a number of times during 3 days, and the more I read it, the more I like it. Contrary to what someone else said here, I don't think it should be longer. Long poetry can become very strained. It's good as it is.