'til the last until — @Lawrence on read.cash

@Lawrence 5 July 2020

'til the last until

'til our smile slowly fades 'til we get tired of reality 'til we try not to care too much 'til we serve our purpose 'til we find ourselves again 'til our genuine smile sprouts 'til we cry out of laughter 'til we love and be loved 'til the last until

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4 comments

@salma24 6 July 2020

Too short as a poem but meaningful. Make a longer next time.
- @wakeupkitty 6 July 2020
  
  Why is it too short for a poem? There are no rules if it comes to a poem. There are many different styles. Haiku, for example, is a very short poem, one without even a title. If poetry jas to follow rules it means you kill creativity and feelings...
- @Lawrence 7 July 2020
  
  This is an expression and I think if the text contains your though and feelings, short or long, that is okay and I think that I already have expressed my thoughts in this poem. Thanks anyway😀
@wakeupkitty 6 July 2020

You better add this to a more specific community. If your title is the prompt and you wrote it in 10 minutes you are welcome at freewriting. There are communities for poetry. See SST communities. You are already accepted by one. 👍🍀