@Kleah97 31 July 2021 more from that month

Makin.

Hello fellas! I want to share with you some momentus of my life that hows it's makin! Okii, so let me go on..... *Sometimes in our life we feel an oblivion, seems like in the state of an unaware of what was happening around us. We try to understand that sometimes it happened for a reason. For a reason to see the good in every situation.* As of the moment, I feel myself that it was like a feeling blue and since the weather is enjoying to be with me, I take it as an opportunity to make the rain understand my side. So, I look around a paper and ballpen and this is what is goes..... **MAKIN.** . . -**by kleah** ***In the midst of rain*** ***My heart pourin;*** ***Water in my eyes dancin*** ***Dancing in the flowin.*** ***Emotions flexin*** ***Just like high of the mountain*** ***And flows like a fountain,*** ***That teardrops from within.*** ***Braver enough to maintain*** ***Even you feel like a thin*** ***But still, you still up to be makin*** ***Co'z you have to be still, believe in.***

**As you criticize this piece, it tells about how she made it and how she makin. It's hard for her to handle all those things that it feels like that all problem is within her. At some point, she is drowning by her tears. It may hard for her** ***to hold her emotion, to fix herself, to stand again her worth.*** **But as you can see, despite all the waves slapping on her still she makin'. She made it to stand, to fight, to conquer all the things inside of her and now because of her fighting spirit to keep believe in herself,** ****she is makin.**** Sometimes, Rainy season expressed us. Expressed of what was inside of us. I wrote this poem not just about others, I just suddenly feel the moment of being me in the midst of the window, gazing the rain. Though, it was blue but at least it holdin me the power of the tip of my pen. My hand works to tell my thoughts inside and it makes me satisfied when all of the sadness was bursting into moist. I know it is satisfying when you really give a moment to yourself even you are brimming tears. Through the poem that I made, it remembers all the uncertain things I've been through. It gives me courage to move forward whatever it might be because one thing that I can assure is I'll be makin of what the uncertain things may come. Someday it will gonna be fine or everything will gonna be fine. Even it's your choice to be in the mood sometimes we couldn't control it seems like it is tired holdin on that's why we need ourselves to out our emotions for us to be okay. *Critiquing piece from every human depends on how you interpret it. Of course we have different principles in life that makes you interpret in a different way. It's up to you how you will going to understand every choice of word of the author.* *An author has its own style of expressing their idea, choice of their words just like idiomatic expression and colloquial terms, and pointing the main points. Those are some styles of a writer.* *As a reader you need to find out what was really the main point it has be.* To sum up: It's okay not to be okay. It's okay to feel blue. It's okay not in the mood. It is inevitable coz you are imperfectly perfect. All you have to do is to make yourself braver enough to handle those things. It might be heavy heart now but it will happy heart later. Whatever it be. You'll be makin of your own difficulty. **P.s** This is my first time to share my poem and luckily it publish here in read.cash. Allow me read.cash to publish my piece here. *I have more literary piece to gooo.* 😊