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A New Day that seems Yesterday
**Today is another day,** **yet my feeling is the same as yesterday.** **I'm not alone yet feel abandoned.** **Physically active but mentally distracted.** **The weather is cloudy which describes my feeling today.** **Try to cheer up myself however, my heart and mind don't sway.** **I hope later today, I will be okay.** **For me to write a nice article or story.** **Don't worry, I am fine and all right.** **Just need more time to endure this pain** **for this sadness vanish quickly,** **and for me to be happy.** I wrote this poem based on what I feel today. I hope you'll appreciate it. 😊
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It's nice dear, you are so good in poetry, analyzing and putting your feelings in writing that rhymes! Kudos! I love it
I'm happy you like it @Jaysea1447. 😊😊😊😊😊Thank you so much :)
You are always welcome
A poet with an expressionism style. 😉
Thanks, @Jeaneth. :)
I think you need an inspiration for you to feel happy again, try to Watch a kdrama and look for Oppa, there are so many of them di ka magkakamayaw sa pag pili sa kanila 😘 Pinapangiti lang kita sis ah, don't think too much kasi, nagiisip ka ata masyado, talk to him na lang, he will surely make you feel happy and Loved 😁 God 😇🙏
It's okay sis, yes yes God loves us so much. Thanks for reminding me about drama. haha. coz' that's one of my stress relievers. OK naman ako kaya lang mahirap ako mg move on kasi pagdating sa mga bagay bagay especially pag may umaalis. haha
Ayy, sino nangiwan sayo? Nuod ka nga muna, isipin mo muna si Lee Min Ho at Lee Seung Gi 🤩
I prefer Lee Jong-suk and Nam Joo-hyuk. hahahaha
Omooo, Yes to Nam Joo Hyuk, and his look alike Ahn Hyu Seop 🤩
yes. the brother of Lee Jong-suk in one kdrama 😍😍😍😍
Nagsama na sila sa kdrama? Diko alam yung ah
haha. sa Pinocchio. brothers sila dun. panuorin mo yun
Napanuod ko na un, kaso ang tagal na, college pa ako noon ee 😅😂
ay iba pla yun.kahawig nya din kasi.haha
I hope we had a button where we could turn our emotions off and on, as if to rest and meditate on things without worries but that's life ... Rest so you can renew your energy
I hope so, but we're human so we just need to accept that life is full of surprises that makes you feel different emotions
that's correct friend, you have to accept things as they are and move on
Yes friend. That's the best thing to do. Thank you @aleja for your time exchanging opinions with me :) I appreciate it very much :)
For that we are @Gracee 🤗
I love the lines of each spoken word in this poem. This is really a nicely written poem
Thank you. This article is based on what I feel yesterday but now I'm totally fine :)
Oh alright then