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Moon Rise (That time I tried to make song lyrics)
A glimpse to my younger version of a random thoughts writer. Would you want to take a read and give some words about my past works? Here we go! 05•17•2016 -̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩ ***Watching*** *you there* *Yes, you're there. With her* *It adds to the tears in my heart* *Heart left unspoken;* *Heart made immune* *By the pain.* ***You*** *should be out of my sight;* *Maybe the pain would end.* *But crazy is my heart* *For it is empty,* *When there's no glimpse of you* *Everyday.* ***She*** *should be out of the scene* *I should be the one there.* *Sharing the Valentine cake with you* *If this was a movie,* *I can change the plot*. ***Don't*** *smile at me—* *You turn my world around* *Make me fall for you even deeper,* *Falling foolishly* *Falling with no one* *Catching me.* ***Because*** *you're busy* *Making her happy;* *Asking me how to make her smile* *If you could just know,* *You're throwing daggers into my heart.* ***Alas!*** *How could it be* *That you make me happy—* *Then you are the reason* *Why my hearts suffers?* ***Why*** *can't friends be lovers?* *A question so complicated.* *I can't answer that—* *Until you're mine.* ***We*** *can be together* *If ever she'd be out of the scene* *Of if the moon would rise* *In the morning* *Only then you could be mine.* -̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩ Another random prose I made three to four years ago. :-)) I can clearly see how random my ideas are back then. I am just laughing at my 16 year old self a bit. LOL And just a disclaimer, I haven't experienced falling in love with a best friend, I don't even have one. Even this might seem so cringy, I pushed myself to post this as a means of *expressing my younger writer version.* I hope you like it!
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11 comments
Did you compose music for this too?
I tried making a melody, but I failed. I guess I am not meant to be in composing music, hehe. Just a few words without even rhymes, I think it made sense, but still random.
It sounds quite nice singing it. I tried. If I have the time, may I sing it for you? I am not promising but I will give it a try.
Oh yes, of course! Are you going to post in on Youtube? I would love to listen to it!
With your permission. I will give it a try.
I would love to! Go, I want to see it! Thank you for taking interest in my works.
I liked it. Why don't you write an ebook for Amazon. You could be successful. Amazon kindle books are popular or even paperback. It is a good platform fir self publishing. I might try to come up with a melody too. :)
Really? I didn't expect such a feedback. I appreciate all of you to make a song out of it. I am excited to how it will turn out.
I have a portable keyboard. I can try to add chords on it and come up with a melody, but I cannot sing. Lol
I would love to listen to the melody, even just an instrumental. Haha! I feel kinda thrilled that it could really make sense as song lyrics. :-D
It could be a song lyrics.