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Better Off Without Me
Better off wthout me My world isn't perfect nor calm, but it is peaceful before u came... My life wasn't happy nor sad, it was just in between of all the feelings before u came in.. i never did question my well-being and i'm just contented for being me.. then it happened.. u came, u enter my world without trying to find the key... because I opened it for u freely and gladly.. u teach me how to love myself more, lifted my confidence up and u let me know my worth ... i thought this is the love that destined to me... but it is all gone and drifted away. The thought of saying goodbyes hurts me a thousand times.. and leaving you makes my world fall apart .. I stopped questioning my worth and started to realize that I need to love myself more.. I will never be that better person for u, u deserve more than u think u know, I hope someday u will find that person u ever dreamed of, and will make u the happiest man on earth.
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I think you should reread and edit this poem before you submit to the community. See the 3rd word and the rest. For now I will leave your submission open. The moderator.
Thank you for the info. Actually, this poem is raw, I wrote this when I was broke and I haven't checked my grammars yet. hihi But anyway, thank you :)
As @wakeupkitty has mentioned. You can check and edit and I will wait a while until you do. I rarely have the time to check so you still have a lot of time to edit a bit. Even though you said it is a raw poem, it gave me a good read.
You can edit is now. Good luck 🍀