I am shattering inside out

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I am truly glad that everyone who read my fictional story yesterday liked it. It wasn’t intentional to be scary at all. The story was meant to give some laugh and entertainment to you all. At the end of the story, I asked everyone if you would like to read a continuation of the story. And, it seems like you like to have a next chapter. So, here I am writing this blog to entertain and scare you a little bit.

Previously, Denn was invited by his friend, Patrick to go out to a club near Alpha Street. They had fun drinking alcoholic beverages and the view is ecstasy. When David went to took a pee in the bathroom, he unintentionally annoyed a group of men. The girl she was with in the bathroom has a mutual understanding in that group’s leader. Unexpectedly, he thought David was shot, but he was instead. He didn’t want to leave the earthly realm so he fled to the current forcing him to ascend.

Since he cannot entered his home to refill his energy because he was fading away. He chose his neighbour’s house, Alice. He found himself inside the cabinet because it has tremendous amount of energy that can supply and rejuvenate his soul. Before he closed his eyes, the madness and his will for revenge increased. He will hunt the man who shot him and kill him before things went wrong again.

The continuation

“No! No! I don't want to die yet. It's not happening. Let go of me, please!”. He was begging for his release. Deep down in his heart, he knew he didn't deserved it. He has many things on his mind including having a girl friend. Denn has been single for so several years. He had a flung back then, but it doesn't last long. He wanted to have a family.

“You should go with us! Your soul is dying and you must replenish it on the Other Side. Come dear!”, said by the Angel of death. Denn was so persisted, but his soul is dying. He was about to fled when the Angel of death scythe his back. “It's over!”. He had a deep grasped and he opened his eyes. It was a nightmare. A very horrible nightmare.

He got out from the cabinet he was in. He went downstairs. The loud music of the radio can be heard in the whole house. He still remembered when his father went to Alice's house because they are playing a loud music stereo in the middle of the night. His father was so mad and he knew it will be bad. However, he was surprised when his father didn't do anything bad in our neighbour.

He continued to stroll around the house. It was beautiful. The interior designs deserved recognition for he knew Alice was taking up Bachelor of Arts. Certainly, he flew from his friend's house. He wants to have a connection to his friends. However, whenever he tried to speak to Patrick, he didn't heard him. He went to David's house. David was laying down in his bed. He was texting Robert, one of his friend who was there when he was shot.

They talked about his death. David was deeply stressed out and he cannot do anything but cry over and over again. Although he wanted to tap David and says that it was okay. It wasn't his fault. But he can't. That was the time he decided to go to the bar where everything happened. It was 12 kilometers from David's house. Sure enough, being dead was a tragic, but he can slipped through things including cars and buses. No hassle at all.

There are policemen investigating the bar. He knew one of the policemen named Joseph because it was his cousin's boyfriend. He tried to communicate with him by holding the pen in the table. Joseph was sitting and gliding his feet back and forth. Denn knew Joseph had a hard time because Joseph was close friend of him. His death was probably haunting, but he needs to investigate even though he was weakening every time he saw the place.

The investigation continued for couple of months but the man who shot Denn wasn't able to find out. Everyone was worried that his death will be in vain. They thought he didn't deserved it. He was just there invited by his friend and few hours, he died without a cause. His family cannot get over. The more Denn spent his time on earthly world, he continued to grew weak. The sustenance of energy he got was not enough. In fact, it was just a substitute after all.

He carried himself towards the crime scene. He wants to remember everything before his time ends. Two weeks ago, the Angel of death warned him that he has 3 weeks two spend on earth and his soul will be forcibly removed. That was a great danger he felt so he has a week to do the investigation. Day and night, he spent his whole hours to remember the face of the man or anything related with him. The girl who he thought would help was suddenly found dead. They found the girl hanged in her room. A suicide perhaps.

He has three days left to spend on earth. But the case was not improving at all. He did everything he can to find a clue or something can help to find the man. He had lose hope. His death was just a simple, plain death without any value or cause. It was when he found a phone on the comfort room. He thought it seems weird to have a phone in here because no one entered the bar. Or perhaps it was there, and wasn't found out yet.

He opened the phone and browsed. He was like a curious guy wanting to know what's the secret of the phone's owner. He unexpectedly found videos. He watched videos one by one. Until he noticed a particular scene where the shooting happened. Yes! It was a hope and it seems it was the time to blew things up. The video showed that the man who shot him was named Alexis. Alexis Santos. However, something bugged his mind. He remembered that several years ago, Alice talked about her twin brother who lived on North. He rarely visit the town because of his business. “No, it can't be! Alice and Alexis are twins. You gotta be kidding me!”.

Thank you for reading!

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Ahmm anong motive kaya ni Alexis bakit binaril niya si Denn?

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2 years ago

Just for fun. Joke! He was shot po kasi in the part 1 because nakaalitan ng kaibigan ni Denn yung lalaking bumaril.

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2 years ago

Ah okay Marc pwede kana maging director, ang galing ng twist.

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2 years ago

Ah so Yung inistayhan niyang house. Yung nag tago siya sa cabinet na sila Alice ang may ari twin niya ang bumaril kay Denn. Galing ng twist Marc. Yung tinaguan niya pala may connection pala sa pag patay niya kung iisipin parang ang liit lang talaga ng mundo.

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2 years ago

Naks! Nakuha mo ate ang punto ko ngayon sa story. What a little world. Talagang minsan mapapaisip tayo kung bakit nangyayari ang lahat. Anyways, salamat ate sa pagbasa.

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2 years ago

Nice story here. A confusion of twins set in when he has succeded in getting an evidence for his death. I'm waiting for the concluding part

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2 years ago

Yeah, that would be kind of problematic. It's a quite hard for me to write something with a twist here. I hope you'll like the ending tomorrow.

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2 years ago

I cannot recall Alice. Friend ba siya ni Denn? Paano mo kaya maibibigay yung proof sa phone kung kaluluwa ka nalang? Wait magulo yata comment ko, nacoconfuse ako. Haha.

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2 years ago

No, Alice is Denn's neighbour ate. Ah? He can hold things naman pero yung marinig ka nila ay hindi. Haha. Okay lang maconfuse, mukhang hindi pa tapos ito.

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2 years ago

Okay okay. Mas lalo ako naiintriga dito sa story mo Marc. Ang gandaaaa!

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2 years ago

Eh, twist at the end I like it, so there's a hope to get the third part and end part I think.

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2 years ago

Yeah. I don't know what will happen next since I haven't write or outline anything about it. Haha. Let's see tomorrow what the story will hold.

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2 years ago