@Botefarm
Raise The Shoulder High.
It was bleak, dark, gloom Gripping the cable, close to doom Perhaps I'll wait for the sound : boom To check out my life that's not full. ... ... A one last step was all it takes Rising up one more time, Now, my life I'll dictates My joy, happiness all mine to regulate Comparisons no more, am loved Bit by bit, I start to jubilate. ... ... To that one little boy so cute Face so bad, gruesome, brute Raise up the elbow going low The guttered face, make it glow Till joy from your heart flow. ... ... The above is an entry into @avie018 poem contest https://read.cash/@avie018/poetry-contest-ad9f2616 Picture Source : https://unsplash.com/photos/vbuR2q56EZM
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It is a good entry and I wish you good luck with the contest. At times it's hard to believe some once we're little cute boys especially if they open their mouth or cause a boom... I doubt they were cute once, it's what we love to think, believe in. In reality many nasty little children are walking around. I hope @heartbeat1515 reads this one. 👍🍀
The entry is late now and it saddens my heart. I submit it to a poem and fiction community and those guys refused to approve it. This is not the first time I'll be making a post and it won't be accepted by the community despite Fulfilling all the rules.
I am sorry to hear that. Was the community you requested to for that specific contest only? There are plenty of communities which you can join with this or do without one. Ot's not that you will be read or noticed more. You can post here too. SYT: Poems https://read.cash/c/syt-poems-bd19 Freewriting https://read.cash/c/freewriting-c99e
That is weird. They supposed to accept if it follow the rules. Did they give their reason for rejecting? Well, thank you again for calling me dear friend. At first reading this poem, playing shooting game comes into my mind. It felt to me like you are talking about something in life using a game character.