@Bithan
Rosemarie Baker
The tears I never cried Watered down my soul Sunk my heavy heart And flushed away all hope The unspoken Drowned like silent screams A floating voice Remains on the surface Twirling through my throat Like a hurricane Reckless unpredictable Ready to explode
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Who is rosemarie baker? Is this poem for her? The title seem to be not related to your poem. I like how you expressed the unspoken words through poems.
She is a person.. And i dedicate her... 😇
I see. My suggestion is the next time you want to dedicate a poem to someone, don't make their name as the title unless you use it as apart of your poem. It becomes unrelated. You can mention their name at the beginning or the end of the poem and give this poem a better title.
Ok... thank you for your suggestions.... ☺
You can edit the poem and call it the Flood or Flushing. Nevertheless, I like it even with a title that tells us nothing more about the person.