@rah 23 September 2021 more from that month

Novel Number 2 Progress. About 20% of the way through the text and have had a net gain of 199 words although to be honest I'd written it ages ago and been through it a few times previously,. It is the more recent stuff that will need more work. One of the major things is to create consistency and avoid unnecessary repetition. That is why it is so important to go through it again and again so the narrative is rich and layered and not tedious.