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"You Look Good Together"

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Written by   143
6 months ago

It was a rainy afternoon. I can feel every drops of rain dripping all over my body. I can feel the coldness as the heavy wind blows. And the chill down to my spine as I look around and saw the tall trees surrounding us. We are in the woods. I am with my boyfriend and my bestfriend.

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Three days ago, we just finished our periodical exam. We are in high school, by the way. On the last day of our examination week, me, my bestfriend and my boyfriend planned a three-day trip to our favorite island. We packed out things and went on a four-hour ride to the island.

On the first day, it was great. We loved the beach. We played along with the waves. We enjoyed rolling our bodies on the white sand. And we felt the heat coming from the sun, yet liked it even if it will get us tanned.

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It was a tiring day so we decided to sleep early and continue the adventure the next day. We took a bath and jumped off to our own respective beds. I closed my eyes and slept.

Hours passed, I was awaken by giggles. Giggles of two people enjoying each other's company. I get my sleepy head up and walked through the corridors. There, I saw the love of my life and the only person I most trust kissing, and looked like they're almost getting "there". They were obviously making out. I saw the two important people in my life stabbing me at my back. I felt the numbness all over my face and body. I can't walk. I can't scream. I just felt my heart throbbing so loud while breaking into million pieces. I stared at them and realized they look good together, and everything went black.

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It was a rainy afternoon. I can feel every drops of rain dripping all over my body. I can feel the coldness as the heavy wind blows. And the chill down to my spine as I look around and saw the tall trees surrounding us. We are in the woods. I am with my boyfriend and my bestfriend. I looked at them and they, indeed, look good together. Together lying on the ground. Together, facing the afterlife.

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I looked at my sinful hands. They are covered with blood. One last time, I stared to the man I loved and the girl I trusted and said, "You look good together".

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I just tried publishing this short story. And I hope you enjoyed reading it. This is obviously a fiction. ✌️😁

Writer: @charmingcherry08

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this kind of revenge is scaryyyy ACK it is scary what brokenhearted person can do so we really have to choose a someone loyal who wouldn't break our trust or else, they die. chour! hahaha

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6 months ago

Exactly! We should choose the person we love.

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6 months ago

And if they ever hurt us, let's not ruin our future because of them. Don't kill and be in prison just because you feel so hurt hahahaha

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6 months ago

Hahahahahaha. Will take that advice from you, lol.

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6 months ago

I thought at first, its a real story. 🤣 Its the reality sometimes., those who you think can be trusted and given your heart are the one who stabs you at the back. How sad. 😔.

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6 months ago

Yes. This may be a fiction, but the thought will always remain. The thought of having closest people to you who will betray and stab you in the back.

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6 months ago

I agree. 😔

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6 months ago

Yes. 👌

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6 months ago

You're a good fiction writer 👍

Sad to say that this story may be fiction but it also happens in real life. Things people do for the sake of love. Some people even try to gain the love they want at the expense of others, and in the process they lose significant people and harden their hearts. Some can even commit big mistakes such as violence and crime because of intense love.

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6 months ago

I really am sorry for the late reply. 😁

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6 months ago

You are definitely on point. This may be a fiction, but it really is a reality. The idea of being betrayed by the closest people to you. This situation portrayed three different circumstances and reality. First, even if you give your love to your partner a 100%, if they'll cheat, they will. You can't be in control with that. Second, even the closest person to you can betray and stab you in the back, so trust no one. And third, love can make you blind. Love can make you do the things you thought you can never do.

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6 months ago

Luhhh 😳😳 and the beautiful story turn into a nightmare, for them and for her. But this happens in real kife no, Kung sino pa yung best friend mo sya pa yung aahas sayo.

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6 months ago

Yes, ate. Madalas po talagang nangyayari 'to sa totoong buhay. Yung mga taong pinagkakatiwalaan mo, sila pa pala ang sisira sa 'yo. Yung mga taong akala mo kakampi mo, tinatraydor ka na pala patalikod. Sad, but it happens in reality.

Ps: Sorry po sa late na reply. Thank you sa pag-comment, Ate! 😍🤩

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6 months ago

Minsam pa nga asawa mo na, naahas pa 😟 daming higad kasi sa mindo ee. Tsk.

Okay lang yan dear 💪

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6 months ago

Yes po, Ate.

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6 months ago

It was a nice article.. keep it up.

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6 months ago

Thank you so much! 🤩

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6 months ago

Nice Article Dear

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6 months ago

Thank you so much. But have you read the article? What is your thought about it?

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6 months ago

Yikes! I'm pretty sure your bestfriend and boyfriend will remain loyal to you forever and ever. That is if they got a chance to read this. lol!

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6 months ago

Thank you for sharing your thought about this. 🤩 I really appreciate it.

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6 months ago

Hahaha. Yeah yeah, maybe they will realize what they have done. Lol. 😁

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6 months ago

@charmingcherry08 it give me chills huhu my lights are off

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6 months ago

I'm sorry! Hahahaha. 😁😂 But at least I know that you read it 'til the end. 😳 Thank you so much!!!! 🤩

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6 months ago

it's okay hahahhha

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6 months ago

Yeah. Hahahahaha.

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6 months ago

whAtttt?😳😳😲😲i'm getting goosebumps on the last part grrrr JAJJAJHAHHAA lalo na sa pictureee halaaa gabi pa naman na😭😭

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6 months ago

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I'm sorry babygirl. But thank you for dropping your comment in here. 🤩

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