@ahmadmanga 9 May 2022 more from that month

My Visual Novel "White Room Journal" is now on RoastMyGame.com *Roast it as much as you'd like:* *here!!* https://roastmygame.com/game/white-room-journal

Earlier this week I got a comment on my Cloudy: Make it Rain page on Roast My Game, a website I posted my game on a few years ago, only to then forgot about. https://roastmygame.com/game/cloudy-make-it-rain **If you're new to Roast My Game:** Roast My Game is a site created to help game developers gather 'sugarfree' feedback on games they are working on and to inspire other game developers by sharing development progress. -- The official "About" Page https://roastmygame.com/about When I checked it out, my game was trending and a few comments told me how to make the game better. I'm not sure I have the source codes for it anymore, and I don't think I want to update it. So I decided to add my current games, that I actually can fix. A few days (and countless procrastinations) later I added one of my closest-to-complete works "White Room Journal" on the website as well. Check and give your opinion on this page: ---> Roast: White Room Journal https://roastmygame.com/game/white-room-journal *Link:* *https://roastmygame.com/game/white-room-journal* About the Visual Novel: "White Room Journal" is a short 5 minutes Visual Novel about a girl in a hospital and her weekly meetings with the player character. I developed this project to practice making a visual novel with Ren'py. You can check about the game in my Devlog for versions 0.2 here and 0.3 here. I changed nothing since the last Devlog. I have some ideas on how to make this Visual Novel better, but nothing is really planned right now. Your opinion might change that. https://read.cash/@ahmadmanga/visual-novel-devlog-white-room-journal-02-ef50ad49 https://read.cash/@ahmadmanga/visual-novel-devlog-white-room-journal-03-animating-polishing-18c2bc6b Thanks for reading, and I'm waiting for your comments there. This post is also on Hive's Peakd. https://peakd.com/hive-176981/@ahmadmanga/my-visual-novel-white-room?ref=ahmadmangazap