Reflection
I saw a girl We were just at the same age I saw sadness in her eyes She looke pale and depressed But she was a great pretender She comports other people But not herself She can advice what others what to do But can't apply those in her life She is happy go lucky girl But inside her was a crying soul screaming for help To help her get out from the darkness To help her find the light Her heart was stabbed with hurtful words Her heart was broken by people she loves She looks Okey She is definitely pretty fine She is good at hiding her pain No one comforts her No one cares for her She was taken for granted She is not happy She was unloved She was helpless And that girl I saw Was the girl I facing in front of the mirror
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Your grammar really needs way more attention. Too many failures dear. Still I think this is something good you wrote. 🍀
Ok.and thank you.