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The Adverse Effects of Alcohol - Freewriting Entry 1
Sure enough, life has its many ups and downs, and most people need a few shots of tequila or scotch on the rocks to take the edge off life every now and then. But have you ever paused to wonder what alcohol does to you? Let's talk about the physical effects. Now, you're a really beautiful/handsome person until you take too much alcohol. When that happens, you most likely stop looking like the **charming** figure people know you as, and more like you were hit by a truck. Is that **release** alcohol gives such a desperate need that you're willing to lose your glow? Next, your body above anything else suffers the most. Extensive alcohol intake can be extremely dangerous to your liver, and sometimes, before you can try to salvage anything from the **ashes** of your alcohol-burnt liver, it's too late. Let's look at it this way: your body will thank you for letting go of that glass. If you're having a hard time letting go of your alcoholic habits, you should probably join a **support** group, as then you will be in contact with people who are going through similar issues and then you can get some aid. *This is a freewrite* **Timer set**: Smartphone; Start time 2:05pm West African Time (GMT+1) End time 2:15pm **Topic**: Alcohol's Effects - Freewriting Contest **Prompts used:** ashes, support, release, charming **Corrected with**: None **Device used**: Smartphone. **Written in:** English; no translation
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I really hope more people will read this because you wrote a great piece and you even added some humor! Very well done. 🍀👍
Thanks! It was my first try and I was a little short on ideas, but I'm happy you see it this way. I hope I can do even better with my next try 🙂
You did better for sure! 👍🍀💕
Thanks!
The word "people" is not a prompt the word is "perplex".
Every person who has the habit of drinking alcohol finds it very difficult to stop drinking, but if the person makes the quotient decision to stop drinking, he stops it and if it becomes very difficult for him to seek help, the important thing is to make the decision.
alcohol other than having serious health implications, it is anti social and cause so many social problems. The addictive aspect of it causes home finances to be slowly taken away to fulfill the urge and this causes homes to suffer from a drunkard as its head.