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4 years ago
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You can't control how other people receive your energy. Anything you do or say gets filtered through the lence of whatever personal shit they are going through at the moment. Which is not about you. Just keep doing your thing with as much integrity and love as posible.

Here presenting a

"Prayer"

Oh god! Hear my prayer

As you are so dear,

I can remember you

You are always new

I want to meet you

When i stand before a view

I feel your being

In the nearest everything

As you are my creator

Please torn me into greater

In every walk of my life

And lead me to a peaceful life.

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Change the 1st line...Hear my prayer. It sounds good and maintains the rhythm too

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User's avatar Jihan
4 years ago

Thank you so much vaiya. Thanks for the beautiful line

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User's avatar Nishita
4 years ago

I think that suits and maintains the meaning, but the one you used is not right pattern

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User's avatar Jihan
4 years ago

Which one vaiya?

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User's avatar Nishita
4 years ago

My prayer hear

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User's avatar Jihan
4 years ago

Maybe it should be “hear my prayer?” Am I right?

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User's avatar Sarahmay
4 years ago

yes...check my comment. I suggested her. but she didn't understand

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User's avatar Jihan
4 years ago

Oho vaiya ami sotti e etokhon bhujte pari nai j kon line change korte bolchilen. Matro bujhte parchi Dekhen to thik ase kina!

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User's avatar Nishita
4 years ago

ok..prob nai

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User's avatar Jihan
4 years ago

Thanks for you suggestion. Jihan suggested me that line before your suggestion but i didn't understand. It was my mistake☺☺.

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User's avatar Nishita
4 years ago

It's OK. 😇

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User's avatar Sarahmay
4 years ago

😊😊😊

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User's avatar Nishita
4 years ago

Seriously i couldn't understood when you said. Some minutes ago i read again your comment in that time i understand. And edited the line. Again thanks

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User's avatar Nishita
4 years ago

Hear my prayer hbe...ekhn thik ache. My prayer hear er meaning nai

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User's avatar Jihan
4 years ago

A beautiful poem.

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User's avatar Snezana28
4 years ago

Thank you for your valuable comment

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User's avatar Nishita
4 years ago

Thank you for your valuable comment

Thanks!

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User's avatar Snezana28
4 years ago

Welcome

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User's avatar Nishita
4 years ago

nice... plese like comment subscribe my id

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User's avatar mostanzid.123-
4 years ago

It's done already. Please subscribe my id

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User's avatar Nishita
4 years ago

done

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User's avatar mostanzid.123-
4 years ago

That's nice.

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User's avatar TravelNomad
4 years ago

Thanks

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User's avatar Nishita
4 years ago

Amen 😊

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User's avatar Blackween
4 years ago

❤❤❤

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User's avatar Nishita
4 years ago
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