Fake Love - a lyrical Poem
Fake Love - Poem requested by Sojalam Hana . A love seems so perfect We are both to connect Like fire sweeps the check Thought never to object . As the skies to me and said "Do you love the way it spead?" As I walk down bowed my head I knew her love is dead . As I swift though the stairs I remember that we are pair The time has come to fear Fake love shouting in despair . You gave me the love I don't deserve The love which is buried in my nerves As it hurts, I pulled down the curves Now look at me and observe . Why do I like the feelings of fake? As they are more likely to break I like now to be awake That being with you in my mistake . Fake love has corrupted my whole being Here I am alone and weeping The tears in my eyes now falling While you are running and fleeing . [End] If you love my poems, you can follow me on Wattpad and Facebook Wattpad: https://www.wattpad.com/user/sikritpirson Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/sikritpirson101703? I write Filipino Novels, Poems on English and Filipino, and also Short Stories. I would really appreciate if you're going to upvote my poems and also be my sponsor <3
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The poem is indeed painful, but I'm curious why do you add dots after every stanzas it's quite bothering me as a reader, hehe. Hope you'll not be offended i just ask just for me to understand😊
Glad you asked. Facebook is the first platform that I used to publish my poems. The free version of it, free.facebook,com doesn't support a blank break for breaking the stanza. So I used a dot.
Oh I see, I thought there's something behind the dots, btw thank you for replying😊