@Gwenie
The Mistress
I'm not sure if what to call this, but it just pops out of my head. ____ She is pretty, smart, and sexy She is loved and adored by so many She is the epitome of beauty But one day her world changed Changed by a man she loved dearly But that man have a family She's aware but she can't stop herself They had a relationship secretly She gave him her everything passionately But in the end, he left her He went back to his family She is left with nothing but pain She has no idea how to fix her broken self Her beauty is gone and she was depressed This time there's no one beside her Everyone judged and criticized her She's tired. She's damaged. She's a mess. And she decided to end her suffering. She pulled that trigger and it ended everything. ______ Lessons: Know the consequences of your actions before doing it. I am not judging mistresses here because I know they have their own reasons. What I want to say is that we should know how to handle the consequences of our actions. We should also learn how to forgive ourselves. We are not perfect. We make mistakes. But that mistake does not define our whole personality and our future. We can always change and be better. Thank you and I hope you liked my article. PS. This story is not based on true to life situation of someone I know. Everything I wrote here are my ideas and thoughts. I also do not own the lead image and it belongs to its rightful owner. If ever you find anything wrong or for any reaction, feel free to comment. Thank you.
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Most of us judge mistresses more than the guy. Little did we know that they also suffer just because of love. Not all mistresses want to ruin family. Sometimes they are also a victim of lies, treachery and blinded by love... but still, in the eyes of man and eyes of God, one shall not commit adultery
This is true. One single mistake and everyone will judge you. But we can always ask for forgiveness and change ourself for the better.
That's why we should develop some extra talent and do something for our own earnings. And we should not depend on others. Rather we should do something for us.
Your stories Amazing. I like everyone of your writing. I really like this story written about mysteries.
Yes. This is also an awareness article.
This is a good one, that rhymes at the end really nailed it, its like telling a story fashionately with such a rhymes and flows from it, good job by the way Youre good in writing keep it up ;)
Thank you. There's a lot of people here who helps me improve in my writing. And comments like yours also inspires me a lot.
Did this happen to you? What I wonder is what makes you think she is loved by everyone? How come the mistress is blamed by you and not the man who wants one and doesn't care about his wife? Men lie a lot of it comes to being married or involved to someone else.
Okay, I'll answer it one by one 😅 1st. This did not happen to me. 2nd. I did not say that she is loved by everyone but instead *by so many* 3rd. I did not blame the mistress. The line *everyone judged and criticized her* describes what happened to her but that does not mean it is her fault. People's judgement and criticism depends own their own different understanding, belief, or perception.
Your "lessons" do not sound like that. It doesn't sound either as if you are not blaming the mistress. I wonder why you think many love her? A mistress is usually one person's gf or? Well, thanks for your answer. No need to answer these are just my thoughts how I read it.
A mistress is a woman having extramarital relationship
But with one man. It's not the same as a whore who does it for profession. So the "many" I do not understand or do you mean to say: many men love to have a mistress? 🤔
Ah I see.. What I mean by the line *she is loved and adored by so many* is that she is beautiful and smart that's why many people adored her. Not specifically adored and loved by *men*