Better Off Without Me

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3 years ago

Better off wthout me

My world isn't perfect nor calm, but it is peaceful before u came...

My life wasn't happy nor sad, it was just in between of all the feelings before u came in..

i never did question my well-being and i'm just contented for being me..

then it happened..

u came, u enter my world without trying to find the key...

because I opened it for u freely and gladly..

u teach me how to love myself more, lifted my confidence up and u let me know my worth ...

i thought this is the love that destined to me...

but it is all gone and drifted away.

The thought of saying goodbyes hurts me a thousand times..

and leaving you makes my world fall apart ..

I stopped questioning my worth and started to realize that I need to love myself more..

I will never be that better person for u,

u deserve more than u think u know,

I hope someday u will find that person u ever dreamed of, and will make u the happiest man on earth.

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I think you should reread and edit this poem before you submit to the community. See the 3rd word and the rest. For now I will leave your submission open.

The moderator.

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3 years ago

Thank you for the info. Actually, this poem is raw, I wrote this when I was broke and I haven't checked my grammars yet. hihi But anyway, thank you :)

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3 years ago

You can edit is now. Good luck 🍀

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3 years ago

As @wakeupkitty has mentioned. You can check and edit and I will wait a while until you do.

I rarely have the time to check so you still have a lot of time to edit a bit.

Even though you said it is a raw poem, it gave me a good read.

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3 years ago