@Bryskie
Story
The brightness of the notes I see in your eyes Stories, stories, stories The brightness of your eyes I found in the notes Maybe that's too fast, The tremor Of my heart For your heart, Maybe I'm a jerk, don't listen At the speed of the mind, I can't force it I seem to be in heaven, But you are drowning in your smiles. And if we are up to this point Do not neglect the path you were traveling with And if we reach the end, Just tight Let's take notes, Stories, stories, stories The brightness of the notes I see in your eyes Stories, stories, stories The brightness of your eyes I found in the notes The future may vary, Let go of what you desire But can it even be temporary, Will you be me first? I seem to be in heaven, But you are drowning in your smiles. And if we are up to this point Do not neglect the path you were traveling with And if we reach the end, Just tight Let's take notes, Stories, stories, stories The brightness of the notes I see in your eyes Stories, stories, stories The brightness of your eyes I found in the notes I was never put on this earth for you It's like the whole world is looking 'em when you hug me. And if we are up to this point Do not neglect the path you were traveling with And if we reach the end, Just tight Let's take notes, Stories, stories, stories The brightness of the notes I see in your eyes Stories, stories, stories The brightness of your eyes I found in the notes The brightness of the notes I saw in your eyes I saw it with your eyes The brightness of your eyes I found in the notes
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I thought I can write a story for us. A story were you and I are the lead role. Yet that was just an imagination of mine. An Illusion for myself.
This is good, but honestly I can't follow the storyline. I read it multiple times and had couples of ideas about the thought of this writings but its vague. Or maybe I'm just too shallow not to get it