Rosemarie Baker

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4 years ago
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The tears I never cried

Watered down my soul

Sunk my heavy heart

And flushed away all hope

The unspoken

Drowned like silent screams

A floating voice

Remains on the surface

Twirling through my throat

Like a hurricane

Reckless unpredictable

Ready to explode

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You can edit the poem and call it the Flood or Flushing. Nevertheless, I like it even with a title that tells us nothing more about the person.

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User's avatar wakeupkitty
4 years ago

Who is rosemarie baker? Is this poem for her? The title seem to be not related to your poem.

I like how you expressed the unspoken words through poems.

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User's avatar heartbeat1515
4 years ago

She is a person.. And i dedicate her... 😇

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User's avatar Bithan
4 years ago

I see. My suggestion is the next time you want to dedicate a poem to someone, don't make their name as the title unless you use it as apart of your poem. It becomes unrelated. You can mention their name at the beginning or the end of the poem and give this poem a better title.

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User's avatar heartbeat1515
4 years ago

Ok... thank you for your suggestions.... ☺

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User's avatar Bithan
4 years ago
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